The abandoned madhouse

Chapter 4

''Ricky!! Ricky?!'' I scream in his face as I kick the creature off of Ricky. But when I don't get an answer I'm starting to panic.

''No no no no! Ricky!! Please!''

His eyes are lifeless and his whole body is like a ragdoll hanging in a hook. The creature has returned but know it isn't a cute, hairy little pink ball. Now it's white with a huge mouth and with big fangs. The eyes are small black holes and it stares at Ricky white a grin on it's face. Then 'the hook' that Ricky has hanged on dissapears and he falls lifeless to the ground. The creature runs to him and dig it's teeth deep inside Ricky's stomach.

''NOOOO!!'' I'm about to run and kill the creature when Chris grab me and hold on to me, prevents me to reach for the monster.

''Sssch. Ash. It's no time for that.'' And then he turns me so I can see what he has seen. A big man stands a few meters away from us. And just by his muscular body I know it's Devin, one of Ricky's and mine nearest friend. He looks like a butcher with his chaperone and his big slaughter knife. I gasp at the sight of his head. He wears a mask. The mask has a horrifying look. With it's distorted mouth with infected cuts and stitches up on the chins, just like the joker. The few flocks of hair on his head are black and the eyes are deep holes, like a chasm. He has quite a big nose but the several infected cuts all around the face do that he looks like a monster.

He takes a step against us and Chris starts running, dragging me behind. We run and run. The adrenaline that's filling our veins helps us to continue running. And when I feel like I'm going to collapse I see the spiral stairs.

''There!!'' I scream at Chris and points. We run to the stair and we throw ourselves down it. We burst through the door and the sun makes me blind.

Chris drags me to Ricky's car. He opens it with the car key which he probably took from Ricky's pocket. We throw ourselves into the car and Chris hits the pedal.

'Fuck my life. Ricky is gone. Ricky is dead! Dead As Fuck!' is the only thought that's going trough my mind while we drive away from the nightmare house.

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Oooooh nooo! Ricky!!!

Yaaay Devin!!

And yaaaaay for the MIW song reference! ( I added that in just now because Ricky said sometime that this (Dead As Fuck) probably was his favorite song on their latest record (Reincarnate))

But yeah this was it!

And if you're curious, I can tell you that when I wrote this for almost a year ago I was going to kill Chris and Ash as well. I was even going to set in a 'The Amity Affliction' reference. But I decided it was going to be too sad so I skipped that. But if you want I can maybe do a Chapter 5 just so you guys can read the 'real' anding if you want. So write in a comment if you want that to happen :)

Please vote on this story so I can see if you liked it or not.

(I have got another storry like this but it's more of a space story and it's with all the BVB members so comment as well if you want me to make a book on that one ( unfortunately it's on swedish so if enough want it to happen I can translate it to english (it's a bit longer than this one as well)))

Hugs / Maja

Also the music I've had in this story is;

Chapter 1. AMERICA - Motionless In White

Chapter 2. This Is Halloween - Marilyn Manson

Chapter 3. Her Name Is Alice - Shinedown

Chapter 4. Dead As Fuck - Motionless In White