Is this even real?

Chapter Five

"I'm ready to go!" Rae cheered
She walks up, next the the gaurd who aggressively grabs her wrist and drags her to what seems to be a cabin? Though Rae doesn't say anything, in fear of the gaurd. Next thing she new she was in the cabin and the door was closed behind her. There where about 90 other girls in the cabin, each had there own bed. The cabin was huge. Well at least to Rachel. The first room had what seemed to be hundreds of bunk beds, there also seemed to be a some what hang out area which had a television and some chairs. There was two other rooms that parted off the first one. The room on the left didn't have a door but besides a arch way. Once you walked through it you saw the kitchen. The right room had a bathroom sign on the door. So most likely it's the bathroom.

Rae finished her look around and went to pick a bed. She walked through all the girls and beds untill she found a empty set of beds and she claimed the top.
'woah! They have a little shelf here in between the wall and bed!' Rae thought to herself. She quickly unpacked her belongings. The picture of her late family on the shelf, next to her pillow. A cup the housed her toothbrush and toothpaste, and lastly for the shelf a book she had probably read ten thousand times by now. Then under her pillow was a small sketch pad that had little drawings of flowers and other beautiful plants. Oh and of course a blanket was spread across the bed.
'Perfect!' she thought as smiling at her little done work. Suddenly a small bell started to ring from the kitchen. All the girls begane to walk to the kitchen for something.
'Dinner?' Rae climbed down the wooden latter to see what was accruing in the kitchen.
'Oh it is dinner!' A line is noticeable forming agents a wall and Rae joins in guessing it's the line for dinner. The line continued to move all the.way untill she was in front. A plate was placed in her hands and then some steak and carrots.
'woah.. this is way better then cereal every meal!'
The line continued to go all the way to the beds. Some of the girls eat on their beds and some eat on the floor. Rae decided to eat on the bunk. 
'I was right this is a lot better then cereal!'