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Lily was watching her children in their cradle cuddling. The oldest child's name was Harry Potter, who had a tuft of a jet black hair and green eyes. We could already see that he looked like his father. He was 14 months old. The other child however, didn't look at all like her parents, she had a tuft of (h/c) on her head and had (e/c) eyes. She was 2 months old. When people first saw Lily or James holding the two children, they didn't realize that they were siblings just by looking at them. It was quite funny because the two children were born the same day with an exact year of difference, and they were really, really close. Lily took the little girl's hand in hers, the little girl took one of her mum's fingers in hers. Lily smiled at that, no mater how many times her children did that it was still cute. She loved to see theirs littles fingers wrapping around her big one.
The few people that saw her found the girl adorable, and that little girl was you. You and Harry were best friends and he was a wonderful big brother. When you were scared he came to confort you and when you cried he always came to make sur you were okay. You always shared, you never hurt each other, and Harry held your hands and cuddled with you every chance he had. Lily and James always loved it when you did that, they were sure nothing would happen to either of you if you were together. You had the perfect baby life, or at least till that night.
Lily had just put you and Harry to sleep in the crib you shared, they had bought you a crib when you were born but you cried when you weren't with Harry, good thing you were really small even for a baby. One night when it started storming. Thunder boomed outside, waking you up and started sobbing since you hated thunder. Harry gave you hags while you cried, he gave you stuffed animals, he did everything he could to sop you from crying.
It hurt his little heart to hear you cry. After a few minutes of Harry trying to calm you down, a crash was heard from downstairs, it made you cry harden. Harry pulled you closer to him, you were shaking. The door flung open by your mum. She saw you two and tried to calm you down. Suddenly, James ran into the room. "My love, protect ours children !" He yelled. "I love you." Lily said "Me too." And kissed dad. Dad ran out of the room. Lily was now sobbing agains you and Harry was looking up from the crib confused.
Lily looked at Harry and you and said "My lovely children, I don't think we will see each other again but I want you to know I love you with all my heart. Harry, I want you to watch on your sister to make sure nothing bad happens to her and that she doesn't get bothered by people that could want things from her that she can't or does want to give. Make sure that people doesn't brake her heart or at least the less possible. Be an overprotective big brother Harry. Y/n, i want you to make sure that Harry doesn't brake too many hearts. I know he will not everyone will go out with him and that will make some people sad. Please make sure you both are safe when you do stupid things. And I know you will, if not James will be very disappointed. Make good friends, be careful, not everyone is thrust worthy. Make sure you both find wonderful people to spend your life with. And most of all be nice, some people could look bad in your eyes but aren't or they don't have the choice to do the good thing or not. Some people could be mean but that is just their way of asking for help. Y/n, dont let anyone touch you if you don't want to, and you have to say no in certain cituations. You both be careful or when you will join us you, you will pay. Me and your dad love you with everything we have my wonderful children. Goodbye !"
There was shouting coming from downstairs before you all heard a thump. James Potter was no more. Lily wiped her eyes and stood in front of the crib. The door flung open one more time revealing a bald, no-nosed man, named Voldemort. He looked at Lily and grinned. "Move," he yelled. Lily shook her head and stepped closer to the crib. Voldemort growled, "I only need the children, if you don't move, you will live. You have a chance of staying alive, you only have to move !" Again she shook her head. Having enough, Voldemort yelled, "Arvada Kedavra !" pointing his wand at Lily.
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FanfictionY/n Potter is Harry's little sister. They are both born on the same day, but Y/n is born a year later. They are really close cause they only had each other while growing-up. She was a two months old when their parents get killed. When Harry must go...
