Chapter 28

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~Erika's POV~

I woke up with a huge smile

I fell asleep in kian's arms

'wait where is he' I thought realizing he isn't even here


so I got up and ran into the house but I tripped over a rock and went flying into the pool screaming cause

1: I was flying into the pool and

2: I cant swim because I lived in Boston ,it wasn't really swimming weather as I sank to the bottom

I was loosing oxygen and I slowly shut my eyes and went black

~Kian's POV~

I was making some breakfast for me and Erika and I was surprise her and then I

heard a scream and a splash and ran out to the back yard and saw Erika sinking to the bottom in the pool so I took my shirt off and emptied my pockets so my nothing would get soaked and I jumped in after her

she was at the bottom of the pool with her eyes closed not moving

I got her out she wasn't breathing so I called 911 and they took here into the ambulance

I tried to get in but one of the people stopped me "I'm sorry but family only" she said

"I'm her boyfriend I'm the closest thing she has to family" I yell at he very angry

"what do you mean" she asked

"she moved here from Boston, so her family lives in Boston" I say a little bit calmer

"okay you can come" she said

and I hoped in the back and we raced to the hospital and the whole time never let go of Erika's hand and when we got to the hospital i had to call to Ethan and Jasmine

so I called Ethan it rang and rang and rang and rang  and it went straight to voice mail

"DAMN IT" I yell and I call again this time he picked up

"oh thank god" I say out load

"huh" he asked confused

"nothing get to the hospital now" I yell and hang up before he could answer

"Erika Gonzales" she says

I run up to her "yes is she okay, is she gonna live" I say

"I'm sorry but she has gone into a coma" she says

"can I see her" I asked

"sure she is in room 413 and you can stay with her as long as you want" she said

and I raced to room to her room and when I got there I was close to tears


because she was hooked up to a bunch of monitors and she just looked terrible


I ran and grabbed her hand and intertwined our fingers and broke down crying and

then I said" I know I didn't know you that long and we only been dating for literally not even 24 hours but you have changed my life for the greater good and the first time I met you hell the first time I saw you I knew you were the one and don't know what I will do you with out you then i broke down crying again

~Erika's POV~

I woke in a field that looked so peaceful

"oh god am I dead" I said really worried

"no not quite yet" some one said

I quickly turned around and I saw some one I haven't seen in years

"mom, dad" I cried and I ran into there arms "where am I" I ask

"oh honey" my mom said "your in between heaven and the real world" my dad finished

"now you have to chose" my mom said

"chose what?" I asked confused

"to go to heaven or stay on earth" she said

"here this is what happening right now" my dad said and a mirror appeared in front of us and showed us what was happening and kian was crying beside me while I lay there unconscious then he started talking

" I know I didn't know you that long and we only been dating for literally not even 24 hours but you have changed my life for the greater good and the first time I met you hell the first time I saw you I knew you were the one and don't know what I will do you with out you" then he broke down crying

then I almost started crying because it was just to painful to see Kian crying even though we have only known each other for not even half a year

"are you okay?" my dad asked me

"yeah, I'm fine" I said wiping away a tear

"oh and by the way I approve of him" my dad said while pulling me into hug

"thank you dad, that means a lot" I said "and dad" I said

"yes?"he said releasing the hug

"I think I am gonna stay on earth and when I am ready I would come back" I said

"okay if that's what you want and just remember we are always watching over you" my mom said while we did a group hug

"and we love you" my mom and dad said "I love you too" and every thing went dark and I woke up in hospital clothes and kian crying while holding my hand very tight then I kissed his head

he looked up with wide eyes

"hi" I said

"hi" he said close to tears

"babe what's wrong" I said wiping away a tear off his cheek

"I thought you were dead" he croaked "you have been in a coma for a month"

"I have been gone for a month?" I asked shocked

"yes, and you have know idea how much I missed you" he said while leaning and kissing me carefully but passionately when we pulled away Kian smiled then I smiled "god I missed you" he said and pecked my lips then the doctor came in

"oh good your awake" the doctor said "well we took tests while you where asleep so when you are ready you are aloud to go" she said and left

"so when do you want to go" Kian asked

"now! I haven't been here five minutes and I already sick of this hell hole" I said

he laughed and he pressed the doctors button

"ready to leave " she asked as the doctor came in

"yes. where are my clothes" I asked

"oh well they needed to cut them off to put you into that gown" she said n "but we have a store that also sells clothes" she added

"ok Kian can you go get me some sweats and a sweatshirt?" I asked him

"sure babe, what color" he asked

"grey" I said and rested my head on my pillow and slowly drifted off to sleep

I woke up in a hospital bed and the doctor came in and a doctor came "how are you" she said "I'm fine" I said

"well I have some bad news" she said "your parent died in the car crash"

"wait who" I asked 

"your parents died from the wind shield" she said looking at he keyboard

"oh god no" I started crying I cant believe my parents where dead so I started crying then I woke up

HOPED YOU GUYS ENJOYED IT I AM STARTING TO WRITE LONGER CHAPTERS ANYWAY BYE

~Erika

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