(My first story was okay for a 1st draft but I think I can do better which is why I decided to rewrite my breakout story)
It has been 1 year since the Bad Guy's had been released from prison and Marmalade was sent to SUCM for stealing the Love Crate...
Nick Fury was walking down the hall of SUCM prison with a group of SHIELD agents behind him. As they were walking through the hallway prisoners were in their cells watching them. Until the group got to a big metal door. The door then opened to reveal Marmalade in an orange jumpsuit.
Marmalade: Well Nick Fury it's an honor to make your acquaintance.
Nick Fury: Spare me Marmalade. Hope you're ready for your new home.
Marmalade: I'm getting goosebumps just thinking about it.
Nick Fury and his SHIELD agents then escorted Marmalade outside the prison where a SHIELD transport boat was waiting. Meanwhile in New York city The Bad Guy's had just gotten off their flight.
Webs: New York City. I always wanted to come here.
Snake: Yeah I know what you mean. This place is amazing.
Wolf realized they still had some time to kill before the transfer. So they decided to explore the city. As they did they saw some familiar landmarks such as The Empire State Building, Grand Central Station, The Statue of Liberty, Avengers Tower, The Baxter Building, The X Mansion, The Sanctum Sanctorum and many more. As Wolf was walking he noticed an old lady near the street crossing.
Wolf: You guys go ahead I'll catch up.
Wolf then went to the old lady and helped her cross the street.
Aunt May: Oh why thank you young man.
Suddenly a young teenager came running towards the two.
Peter Parker: Aunt May. You forgot this at the house.
The teen then pulled out a handbag. The old lady was surprised.
Aunt May: My Purse. Thank you so much Peter I knew I forgot something.
The teen then noticed Wolf.
Peter Parker: Who's this Aunt May?
Aunt May: This is the nice wolf that helped me crossed the street.
Peter recognized Wolf and stood in front of his Aunt.
Peter Parker: Aunt May stay behind me.
Aunt May: Why?
Peter Parker: He's a criminal. He's dangerous.
Aunt May gasped she was surprised her nephew would make these accusations.
Aunt May: PETER PARKER! I can't believe you would ridicule this nice...animal. He helped me cross the street that doesn't seems like something a criminal would do. You apologize to this nice Wolf this instant.
Peter reluctantly apologized.
Peter Parker: I'm sorry. Mr. Wolf.
Aunt May: You're wrong Peter he's not a criminal. He's a good boy.
Aunt May then grabbed his hand and placed a kiss on his cheek.
Aunt May: Such a good boy.
Wolf's tail started wagging. Aunt May and Peter then walked away.
Aunt May: Peter that was very rude me and your Uncle Ben taught you better than that.
Peter Parker: I know I'm sorry. It's just I was worried. He was a criminal and that worried me.
Aunt May: I understand Peter. But that doesn't give you the right to hurt people's feelings.
Peter Parker: I know.
The 2 then made it to the FEAST shelter.
Aunt May: We'll talk about this later.
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Aunt May placed a peck on Peter's cheek.
Aunt May: Have a good day at work.
Peter Parker: I will.
Peter Parker then walked off until.
A huge explosion was heard near by. Peter Parker then got a phone call.
Peter Parker: Hello?
J.Johnah Jameson(Over the phone): PARKER A HUGE EXPLOSION WAS SEEN AT THE BANK AND WE DON'T HAVE PICTURES!
Peter Parker: I'm way ahead of you Mr. Jameson.
J.Johnah Jameson(Over the phone): THEN WHY ARE YOU STILL ON THE PHONE TALKING TO ME GET TO IT OR YOU'RE FIRED!!!
A dial tone was heard from Peter's phone.
Peter Parker then ripped off his shirt and revealed a familiar sight.
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5 Minutes earlier. Mr Wolf and his friends were eating at a near by pizzeria.
Webs: At least that lady was nice.
Wolf: I know. But her nephew was kinda rude.
Snake placed 10 bucks on the counter.
Snake: A slice of 3 meat please.
Shark: Ahem?
Snake: Oh! And an some parmisan sticks.
The Chef gave Snake his order.
Wolf: Yeah but hey we're in a new city every one in LA knows us. No one knows about us here.
Piranha: Only problem we're not gonna be here very long.
Shark: Too bad.
Just as the gang were about to eat.
A huge explosion at a nearby bank. The gang exited the pizzeria. The police set up a defensive positions around the bank.
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Electricity emerged from the smoke. When the smoke cleared a supervillain emerged.
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