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𝐉𝐮𝐝𝐠𝐞- -Yeonjinx
Winner (1st Place)
Book - Claxton
Cover - 3/5
: It's quite simple. The art is beautiful but the fonts could have been better.
Title - 4/5
: It's different and the word is not common or simple.
Blurb - 7/10
: The blurb could have been short and interesting that will make readers want to continue further.
Plot - 13/20
: I couldn't understand much about the plot. It seems quite complex for the readers. I would suggest the author to make it simple and easy.
Grammar and Vocabulary - 16/20
: There's not much visible mistakes. The vocabulary is simple for readers to understand easily without any difficulties.
Character Development - 7/10
: I didn't find much of character development but I'm sure it will get better in the further chapters.
Writing style - 17/20
: The writing style is not complex and it's easy for readers to understand. I will encourage the author to try to play with words to make the readers feel something, after she is comfortable with her writing style.
Emotion/Enjoyment - 7/10
: It's adventurous. Try to make it more interesting so the readers an get hooked.
Total - 73/100
Review: I really enjoyed the book. The flow of story was constant though the plot was complex . You can improve it for future!
1st Runner up (2nd place)
Book - Villainous Veera
Cover - 2/5
: Could be better and suitable with the theme. The font looks more of a marvel theme and the cover looks a bit messy.
Title - 3/5
: Not bad. You can be more creative with it though.
Blurb - 7/10
: It's quite managed and well-written but there's no suspense in the blurb that may want readers to continue.
Plot - 12/20
: it's a long journey.
Grammar and Vocabulary - 16/20
: There's not many mistakes and errors that I found but readers may not enjoy reading a book with too many complex, difficult and advances words. So, I'll suggest the author to use simple words while writing.
Character Development - 6/10
: There's many little changes among the characters from the start of the story to the end of story in the epilogue.
Writing style - 12/20
: It's okay for the native speakers and readers but for international readers who doesn't understand or finds hard to understand the complex words, I wouldn't recommend this writing style to them. The words are very researched and the writing style doesn't fit for the non native readers.
Emotion/Enjoyment - 8/10
: I did feel something, could empathize with the character's surrounding and environment.
Total - 66/100
Review : This book was near to the winning book's place but the only thing that made a huge difference was the complex writing style that didn't get me hooked. The first place book had a simple and easy to understand way of writing and that's how they got the first place. So, I'll suggest the author to write in a simplified and interesting way .
2nd Runner up (3rd Place)
Book : Lost
Cover - 2/5
: Not well created. The fonts/texts are placed messily.
Title - 3/5
: It's simple.
Blurb - 2/5
: A lot of grammatical and spelling errors.
Plot - 15/20
: It's interesting and suits the theme/ adventure category.
Grammar and Vocabulary 9/20
: As mentioned, a lot of mistakes and errors including punctuations and spellings.
Character Development - 4/10
: could not find much development.
Writing style - 10/20
: It's fine but the author should be aware when to use commas and punctuations. The wrong placement of these marks makes you seem unprofessional and an amateur writer. The writing style could be better and needs more improvement.
Emotion/Enjoyment - 7/10
: I like it. The only thing that needs improvement is the way of writing, grammar and vocabulary.
Total : 50/100
Review: The plot was intresting , you can add some daily basis words for better writing improvement. There's many grammatical mistakes , you may focus on them . Good luck for future.
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