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Description of the book:

Kala is a normal young woman living in London, who is later taken by a man with whom she has a small rivalry, Whitlock. He brings her to a magical land called Asmen, filled with fairies and goblins, centaurs and imps. In Asmen, Kala is quickly lured and her desire for home is vanquished. She meets two friends of Whitlocks, Otis and Adylen, whom he met during his struggle in being accepted. Very soon after they get to Asmen, Whitlock explains what he knows about the land and it's history. The two stay there, making themselves comfortable and getting to know more fey. That is when Kala meets the village's crazy goblin who tells her of corruption in the royal family, about the oldest prince, Lycidas, and how he will attempt to put a curse on the land and control all the people there. Kala and Whitlock must put their differences aside and work together, and, with the aid of Otis and Adylen, defeat Lycidas and save the kingdom. But what does this mean for Kala? Might she have to change herself? Will she risk everyone and everything for the draw of her greed?

Find out in There's a Fine Line; The Battle of the Crown (Book 1 of 2).


Blurb from the book:

"As he walked over to me, crown in my hands, I knew what I had to do. All these years I've put up with him and his selfishness, yet he suddenly decides to become brave for Asmen? He wants to be their hero, their saviour? I don't think so. He gets closer, and I can see the hungry gleam of his eyes, the malicious smile on his face. He was never doing this to be fair, never once cared for the people, the land.

He wants the power."


Character descriptions:

Kala:

Nicknamed princess because of the literal translation of her name                                                           21 years old                                                                                                                                                                               Chestnut brown hair, fair skin, hazel eyes, strawberry lips, petite and delicate physique                     

Whitlock (wit-lok):

Named after his cloud of white hair, Whitlock translating to 'white hair' from latin                                       23 years old                                                                                                                                                                               White hair with some brown, emerald eyes, light olive skin, thin lips, tall and athletic physique     

Otis:

25 years old                                                                                                                                                                               Pale white skin with intricate gold patterns, glowing grey hair, deer horns

Adylen (Ah-de-lin):

25 years old                                                                                                                                                                     Long pointed ears, scaled shoulders, halo of vines, brown hair, blue eyes                  

Lycadis (Lai-sa-dis):

324 years old                                                                                                                                                                               Slender, tall, bright orange eyes, black hair, leathery skin, fangs, scars                                       


**NOTES**

-This book is set in early 20th century (early 1900's)

-I have published this part only so that you can see small previews of the book and know if you're interested before I actually finish the book

-I AM A SOLO WRITER! Which means that I don't have any editors but myself, and maybe my sister and some friends

-I am happy to collaborate with people to write awesome stories

-PLEASE if you haven't already, check out some Holly Black books, they're amazing

-Also, check out my sister's account on Wattpad:@LilacStarFake (she writes great books and her parts are already being published!

-Feel free to private message me on the platform if you've got any questions at all :)


EXPECTED DATE OF PUBLICATION: September 15, 2024




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