Chapter 1: What happened to us?
Darkness
An echoing voice calls the name of what appears to be a young man.
???: Jolyon... Jolyon... JOLYON!
A boy wakes up. He's wearing skinny jeans, a thin blue top, and black boots. He has green eyes, brown hair with a long ponytail, 195 cm (6,4), and is very muscular. His left shoulder has a birthmark in the shape of a star
The boy stands up
???: Where am I?
The boy stands up in a completely dark area. There's nothing there. Only himself and his echo
???: HELLO?!
???: Jolyon...
Jolyon: Me?
???: Yes...
Jolyon: What do you want?
???: You...
Jolyon: Huh?
A light turns on. 8 people sitting on chairs surrounded Jolyon. They are all made of shadows and Smokey and wearing something that resembles the devil
Jolyon: Oh it's you guys...
???: You must've forgotten who we are.
Octar member 1: We are the Octar. We watch over you as you use your ability.
Jolyon: I know, I know.
Octar Member 7: You used your ability again. Do you know what that means?
Jolyon: Yeah. Come on just take it.
Octar member 4: No. We're here to kill you.
Jolyon: WHAT!? KILL ME??
Octar Member 8: Yes. You've used it too much. Now we must kill you.
Jolyon: NOOOOOOO!
Jolyon wakes up again. This time In what appears to be a tent
Jolyon: Ahhhhh! Where am I?! Am I dead!?
A girl runs into the tent. She has pastel blue hair, pink eyes, is 5,7, 20 years old, has a slim figure, is wearing long gloves with a pink and black striped pattern, pink trainers, a blue shirt and candy pins in her hair
???: What happened?! Are you ok??
Jolyon: Yeah, I'm fine. It was the Octar. They were going to kill me!
???: Hey, Hey it's ok. I'm here...
A man walks into the tent. He has long, black hair which goes over his eyes and is about 6 foot.
???: What're you two doing here?
They both jump
???: R-Rishibe!
Rishibe: Candy, Jolyon. What're you doing?
Jolyon: Is it any of your business?
Rishibe: When it comes to you, yes.
Jolyon stands up and walks over to Rishibe
Rishibe: What are you going to do? Use your ability? Oh wait! The scary Octar might get you! Ooooooo.
Jolyon: Shut up Rishibe
Rishibe: This "Octar" is just a load of bullshit. They take part of your sanity? Bullshit!
Candy gets up from the bed and breaks the two of them up
Candy: Stop! I believe that Jolyon is telling the truth! Why would he lie about something like that?!
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JoJo's Bizarre Adventure Part 10: Forbidden Retribution
ActionThis is the second part to my trilogy of fanmade jojo parts. This story is set in the sbr universe in the year 2127. Stand users have been revealed to the public and everyone knows about them Including non stand users. The government however is agai...
