I am open to all criticisms and comments of yours. Be harsh, be kind, be anything. But be truthful. Give me all the suggestions and crap on my story! I come here to be judged. Judge me!
With this story, I want to be a better and regular writer. Tell me my grammatical mistakes. Tell me how I can be more descriptive. Tell me how you feel when you read a particular dialogue. You think I could make it spookier? Happier? Let me know.
And if you feel like I did justice to something, do vote. Not because I tell you to but because you appreciate it. And I swear I will work harder to write like that.
Thank you!
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