Will Anyone Save Me? REWRITE

Chapter 1

??? pov

Darkness and coldness don't mix well together especially when you are so bruised. Darkness is my worst enemy, and I don't have anyone right beside me to comfort me. They took my children away from me,  and I don't know  where they are or if they are really okay. I haven't seen them for months maybe years even. I tried to open my eyes but I just laid there, I don't have any strength.

'Mommy! ' I heard faintly 'Mommy get up, you have to get up please!'  I started to breath hard trying to locate the voice so familiar, ~Moon....Lucian~. I can hear faint crying, is that my baby?? I tried moving again and failed to get up.  'MOMMY GET UP'  I jumped awake still seeing the darkness, I looked around looking for the faint whispers of my nightmare.  Adjusting my eyesight in the dark, I saw a silhouette of a tall man staring at me through my cell door. Noticing that I'm awake, the man started to unlock my door and walked in. I started to crawl backwards away from him when I realized it was my personal nightmare.... and the father of my child who took him away from me. Soon enough, my back hit the wall causing me to whimper. "Well then, the faggot decided to wake up, you didn't last earlier like you usually do." The man said walking closer causing my whimpers to get louder. " Aurelius darling, are you ready for many more rounds?" The man said crouching in front of me. 

"N-no get away from me...." "Why do u keep doing this? a-aren't you tired of me, just leave me be please.  let me see my children at least once before you kill me" I whispered having no strength in my voice to make it sound stronger, its gone when all I have used it for was screaming.  " First of all, you don't tell me what to do" The man said smacking me, which ended up cutting my lip." Second, why yes, you can see your children" He said grabbing my chin harshly and making me look up at him, making me hopeful" If you can survive any longer" He said Harshly throwing my head against the wall and stood up walking to the door where his medical cart was. I started to whimper underneath my breathe ' I knew it wasn't so easy'. "Now, Shall we began?" The man said as he started to walk towards me. I quickly covered my head even tho I was in pain. Once he reached me, he reached towards me getting ready to drag me when someone banged on the cell door. 

The man quickly look towards the doors seeing his boss. " Mr Ashford, what are you doing here?" The Man said facing the door " Well Mr Ambrose, I am here to inform you that you are to unit Aurelius with his children. " Mr Ashford said monotonously, " But sir- But nothing, bring him his children and you are to leave them alone. And another thing we have visitors" Mr Ashford interrupted Ambrose as he stared at him challengingly before walking away. Ambrose looked at me mad. " Your so fucking lucky" Ambrose said walking away from me, walking towards the door leaving with his cart.

I sighed a deep breathe while reaching for my ribs as they hurt while breathing in too deep. They have never healed properly. That's not what is important, what's important is that im meeting my children again after so long. 

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So sorry for making this chapter short and for changing the whole book but it didn't look right for me. Thank you for sparing my book of your time. 

Please let me know if it is good thank you guys so much

In the next chapter, you will meet the Harrisons and Rodriguezs , Adios