The killer's real identity

Run he found us!

Emma's Pov

the next morning, we woke up and eat. then we went to the park and had a picnic "when do your parents come home Norman?" Yamara asked. "They are coming home in about a little under 2 months they left 2 days ago!" Norman responded. "Well, my parents are going to be gone for 2 weeks!" Yamara said. "My parents are going to be gone for 1 month," I said. "Oh, oh" Yamara yelled. we should go on a hike!" "that's a great idea!" Me and Norman responded at the same time then we all broke out in laughter. "Then we should go pack our things and skip school tomorrow to go on the hike for a long time. and with that, we left to go and pack our things. we were close to the house. Then Yamara yelled "THE DOOR IS OPEN"

Norman's Pov

"THE DOOR IS OPEN" Yamara yelled. "WHAT!" Emma yelled in response. we ran to the house, and we walked quietly into the house and heard noises in the kitchen we walked over there and saw a teen grab a knife from the rack and look at is and in the reflection, I saw myself and they violently turned their head toward me and the girls. we ran to find a spot to hide, and he soon walked right by us and looked at us but did not see us then. h-he found us. we did not get a good look at his face, but Emma ran left as soon as he found us, and I took yamara and we went Right Emma left the house or found a new spot yamara looked like she was about to scream and cry her eyes out because we heard...

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