The Day They Cured Death

Hey this is not edited so sorry for all the mistakes. This is my first attempt of a 'real' story so feedback, would really help please, whether or not I should continue. Shout out to @pinksparklesxx for the front cover (:

Blurb

It's the year 3027; humans are not what they use to be. Life is now constant. Death is non-existent. They did it. They cured humanity's biggest downfall - death. Now instead of dying something, very different happens. This is what happens when two lovers fight even through 'death' to be together.

Prologue

'...five.'

"There's no time, look at me."

'...four.'

"Remember my name, remember my face, no matter what just remember please."

'...three.'

"We will be together soon I promise."

'...two.'

"Remember me."

'...one.'

Then it all went black.