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by heyy_star

Devil's Addiction by The_author_kie
(01 - 05)

Book Cover - 7/10
It's okay.

Title - 6/10
No comment.

Description - 3/10
NO COMMENT. Your description is the same as the synopsis on the first page. Full of grammatical errors.

Chapter 1 (01) - 5/10
Aren't you ashamed? Your readers are correcting you in the comment section. Every paragraph there are comments. You don't even reply to them. Like hello??? Are you not worried that your story has many grammatical errors?

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Grammar, Dialogues, etc. - 4/10
I immediately noticed grammatical errors in the synopsis. This is a bad start to your story. Your story's synopsis contains MANY GRAMMATICAL ERRORS and MISSING PUNCTUATION MARKS. You know your synopsis should make a good impression on the readers, because that will determine whether they will continue your story or not. Please edit your synopsis. Reading your synopsis makes me not want to continue reading your story. Even your readers noticed the grammatical errors and decided to correct you in the comment section. You are the author; you should be the one to review your story again and again to make sure everything is readable and understandable to your readers.

Overall Impression - 4/10
As a picky person, I don't like your story. Not my style.

Total = 29/60
Keep improving :)