So for my first battle chapter the feedback was pretty positive, I was disappointed with the lack of reviews as always though. I am sorry about it though because I forgot to include something that would have introduced Atlas before he showed up at the end there, I also am not very good at writing big battles, so I am sorry...
Anyways, the next few chapters are gonna be very chill, cool down from that Chaos, and then we will get back into it in a few.
I really ask for feedback because as I know first-hand there are some amazing ideas in the minds of you wonderful readers, it is just so hard to make you put it in feedback form.
The next few chapters should let you all get to know Nyx and Atalanta/Alissa more intimately before the big event that is happening in about 4-5 chapters that is gonna change stuff a lot.
One of the biggest ideas I need is a suggestion as to when and where the next large battle will take place, and how it will start, because I have yet to plan that out, thanks.
As always there were a few foreshadows last chapter, if you picked up on them, congratz!
Here is a nice short chapter to get the ball rolling with the chill pill for the next few chapters, just lean back and relax while you can.
Enjoy!
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Apollo shone brightly upon the battlefield; the clouds had dispersed with the destruction of Atlas at the hands of Atalanta. Speaking of her, she and her apprentice had taken themselves away from the battle and tended to the wounded boy that they had saved.
"How are you feeling now?" Atalanta asked, making her hands glow and hovering them over the wound to see if it is getting any better... it wasn't, as she had worried, he was still losing blood even with the bandage and tourniquet, it was getting close to the point of being potentially fatal if they don't get him some serious medical help soon.
"Not well, I feel a lot woozier than I did last time we spoke."
"That's not good," she said and turned to her left, "Alissa, we have to get him to the hospital here in New Rome."
"I know it is asking a lot, but do you think you can walk, boy-?"
"My name is Ray," He snapped, looking her straight in the eye.
Wow, Atalanta had not expected him to actually snap at her, maybe it was the blood loss... But in reality, it was her own fault for calling him boy. She looked to Alissa and she was smiling, the Elder Huntress didn't need anything more than the smile to realize that Alissa was thinking of something very inappropriate.
"Very well, Ray, do you think you can walk? With one of us for balance."
"Only if I can pick which one of you." He said with just a touch of something Atalanta wasn't quite familiar with, he was looking at them with those confident eyes, he wasn't afraid of them at all... In fact, he seemed to be quite comfortable around the two of them.
They were both very impressed with how confident he was around them, but Atalanta couldn't help but pinch the bridge of her nose and sigh... but the blush to her cheeks spoiled the act.
"Try to be serious? Please? We're taking you to the hospital, Alissa, help me get him up."
"Of course," she said and the two of them got him up and they both supported him to the hospital. They were both worried about him because he had lost a lot of blood, if they did not get him there soon, he would have to have a blood transfusion because of how much he has lost.
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