Ok, I didn't like it that much, so I made just a few changes
I added a little bit of green to her eyes to give them more personality. I also gave her a watermelon Bandaid instead of just plain red. It kinda matches the vibe of her eyes.
I added more brown to make her hair darker. I prefer her black hair but I wanted to go for this look.
I'm trying to get the coloring right, but it's hard.
If you guys have any advice on how to get the hair to look like this, I'd love to hear :D