💔SURYAGAYATHRI💔 (Completed)

bhagam 22

Avante vaakkukal kettu avalake sthambichu poyi. Aval kanda palathum karuthiya palathum sathyamaakunnuvo ennavalkku thonni. Avalkku avan kettukadha undaakkiya pole thonni. Avante manassine gayathri vaayikkan shramichengilum athinu saadhichilla.

Surya: kettukadhayaanennu nee karuthanda. Ithanu yaadharthyam ninte manassu pole ente vaakkukalum parishudhamaanu sathyamaanu. Ninte mandrangalum thanthrangalum enikku munnil nadakkilla. Kaaranam athinte shrushtaavu njan thanneyanu gayu. Thrilokangalude naadhan kaalabhairavan. Ee bhairavanu vendi janichaval nee. Ennil pranayam enna vikaaram unarthiya sthree. Ente thapassu mudakki ente manassine aakarshicha apsarassu. Ennile kopathe adakkiyaval nee. Ente nenjil kaal pathippichaval nee. Ennile purushane thrupthippeduthiyaval nee. Enikkoppam chuvaduvachaval nee. Sarvalokathinum ammayayaval. Soundaryathinte moorthimath bhaavam neethanne parvathy.

Avante oro vaakkukalum avale kulirukollichu oppam samshayangalil aazhthi.

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Aval thaan padicha adavukal ortheduthu. Avalude arakkettil pidichu avale cherthu vachirunna avante kaykale aval idathu kay vachu thatti maatti. Pinnilottu veezhan poya avante idathu chevikkrikilekku kaattinte vegathil avalude valam kay paanju. Njodiyidayil avan thante thala cherichu. Avalude valam kay pidichu. Kaalukondaval avane thozhichu veezhthi kay viduvichu. Nilathu veena avan back flip cheythu  thirichu avalude munnil thanne ninnu.

Ithrayum nerathe adiyodu koodi thanne avalude dhavani athayathu maaridavum nenjinu thazheyulla bhagavum marachirunna bhangiyaayi njorinjuduthu idathu tholil soochivachu kuthi shareerathe chutti idathuvashathoode pokkilinu thazhe paavadayilekku kuthiyirakki vachirunna shawl avidunnu vittu poyirunnu. Tholil khadippichu vachathinaal avidunnathu vittu poyirunnilla.

Aa iruttil avalude velutha shareeram avanu vyakthamaayirunnu. Maaridathile blouse marakkathirunna bhagam. Nenjinu thazhottulla bhagam aravare vyakthamaayirunnu. Avantekannukal avalude shareerathiloode odi. Nenjile ithranaal shawl marachirunna karutha cheriya marugu. Arayil dharichirunna velli aranjanam. Ellam avante kannukal oppiyeduthu. Aval thante vasthram azhinju poyathu manassilaakki nenju kayvachu marachu kondu thirinju ninnu. Aa shawl vachu aval marakkan shramichu.

Etho oru lokathu akappettirikkuvaayirunnu surya. Aa kaattil kaaladi shabdam kettu avanunarnnu. Aal perumaattam manassilaakkiya avan shawl thiruki ketti vakkan shramikkunna gayathriyude munnilekku chennu avale pidichu valichu oru valiya marathinu pinnil olichu.

Thante prayatnam ellam veruthe poya gayathrikku deshyam sahikkan pattiyilla. Aval avane kopathode nokki entho parayaan vannathum avanavalude vaa moodi.

Surya: shh.. aaro varunnundu.

Gayathri avante kay pidichh maatti. Mindaathe ninnu.
Surya idakkannittu nokki. Vannathu karthu(yoongi) aayirunnu. Range kittanjittu phone uyarthi pidichu nadanna aval range thappi kaattilottu kaal vachathu arinjatheyilla. Suryagayathrimaarude bhagyathinu shobana veedinte vaathilil ninnukondu karthune vilichu.

Shobana: di karthu neeyithengotta pone. Vanne ingottu sandhyakka avalude nadatham

Ammayude vilikettu swabodhathilekku vanna karthu
Karthu: ayyo njanividam vare vanno? Deivame kaadu. Snakes. Omg. Amma vilichathu nannayi. Ippo ente shavadakku nadannene.

Avalum ammayum akathekku poyi.

Kurachh ulkkattil ninnu kondu surya ithu kandu. Aval poyathum avan deerkhanishwasam eduthu.

Gayathri: poyo?
Surya: mmmm

Appozhanu surya thazhottu nokkunnathu. yaadharthyam avanippazhanu manassilaakkiyathu. Nenjinu thazhottu aravare nagnamaayirunna gayathriyude shareeram avante shareerathodu otti irikkunnu. Avalude maaridam avante nenjinodu chernnirikkunnu.

Gayathri avante nottam poyathu kandappo avane vegam thalli maatti kaykondu maarumarichu.

Aa kurachu nerathekku avante control motham poyirunnu. Aake viyarthu. Anthareeksham choodaayi thonni. Ithe kaaryangal gayathrikkum anubhavappettu. Aval vegam aa shawl enganeyo pidichu chutti pavadayil kuthi vachu.

Vattivaranda thonda kondu avan valare kashtappettu kondu paranju

Surya: a....am..ss..so..sor...sorry
Gayathri: m....mm...mmmmm

Aval vegam nadannu veettilottu keri poyi. Kurachu nerathekku surya avide thanne ninnu.

Viyarppu olichirangiya nettiyil kayvachu. Kannukal murukkiyadachu. Avante manassilekku avar thammilulla nimishangal minnimarinju. Avante chundil cheru punchiri virinju.

Pathiye avanum nadannu veettilottu poyi.

How was this part?
Enikkariyilla ezhuthiya nimishangal 18+aayirunno ennu. Aayirikkum ennu thonni. Athaanu angane mention cheythathu.

Ithupolathe moments ezhuthan enikkariyilla. But ee storyil ithupolathe momentsinte aavashyamullathaayi thonni. Because ithuvare njan cheythathil vachu vyathyasthamaaya behaviour aanu ee storyile charactersinu. So........

Pls comment how was this. Ithupolathe moments inj konduvarano?

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