Lighter Fluid - A Creepypasta Novel. [REVAMPED]

Hello - 🩷

I usually forget i actually have apps on my phone so i forgot this existed. Im revamping the story and changing the style completely [almost] and basically just fixing run-on sentences, grammar, etc. Whatever i feel needs editing will be edited. LOVE YA!!!!!

EDIT: I realized i dont have much plot or a background here, so ill fill that in.

[this is pretty much a re-write of the JtK story lolz]

Jeffrey Allen Mason was born into a pretty dysfunctional, but rich, family. Not long after he turned seven, a young boy named Liu was adopted by his parents. Liu was around four, and he was very skittish. Eventually, he warmed up to Jeffrey, and the two became inseperable!

Unfortunatley, when Jeffrey was 15 and liu was 12, a house fire started. It was caused by a gas leak near the kitchen stove, and spread from there. Both of their parents died not long after the ambulance took them, and Jeffrey was severely burned, leaving pink patches on his skin. Luckily, the fire was put out before it hit his face too badly.

After the news of his parents dying got to him, he started losing it. He was brought to a new school after being adopted by nicer, richer parents and moving to a nicer, richer neighborhood.

[Jeffrey was not a very happy camper about this, if ya know what I mean]

Jeffrey and Liu started becoming pretty popular on the fact that they were burn survivors. This got to Randal Warren, who was the former popular guy.

Upon closer inspection, he felt that Jeffrey was really cute [hot, even.. haha get it bcs fire... and hes rlly attrac- nvm you get it.] and fell in love. He was so overwhelmed by his feelings, that he began bullying the poor kid!

Well, not bullying. It was more of poking fun at him. Harmless in reality, but it was bullying in Jeffreys eyes. Jeffrey refused to go to school, and instead stayed home, carving his face up. The trauma of the fire and his parents deaths had finally caught up to him, as well as his depression from the two events.

Jeffrey hated his new family, hated his school, and most of all, hated Randal Warren. He felt that he was rushed into a new family, as if he was forced to get over it.

He still called his foster parents by their first names, or called them Mr and Mrs Wood. [Lius birth surname was Daviss [hes Keiths real brother but niether know, i might add them later] and Jeffreys birth surname was Mason.]

He still stuck with his "old" name, Jeffrey Allen Mason. He would correct anyone, who referred to him as Jeffrey Wood. Including his parents, doctors, his many psyciatrists, and teachers.

Randal was obsessed with him now, however. He fell deeper and deeper in love, not only because he was so attractive, but he had an infectious personality. The only downside to this was that he got a lot of girls with these traits.

One girl, Jane [insert last name], became his girlfriend. As well as this, she became a walking target for Randy and his gang. They beat her up behind the school daily, stuck gum in her hair, and threatened to light her on fire if she stepped a foot near his man.

But some people dont learn, do they? Tsk, tsk, tsk. [did i seriously fucking tsk in a wattpad book? whatever.]

Randy lit her on fire, and because of the anger from that and the trauma from the past fire, he [Jeff] attempted to kill Randy. The poor boy [Randy] , however, was still in love with him [Jeff] , though. [hinting at a pain kink, if you read this before the revamp you know this tho]

Years later, when they were twenty-one [Jane survived btw] Randy went out to a paety and got kidnapped by Jeffrey.

Insert a bunch ov atempted murder, a bit of them getting friendlier, and finally, the events of Chapter One.

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TL;DR: Jeffrey is adopted after a housfire and Randy thinks hes rlly sexy so Randal lights Jeffreys girlfriend, Jane [The Killer, I dont have a last name for her yet] on fire and then he gets kidnaped by Jeff and they do gay stuff

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KEY POINTS THAT PROB ARENT OBVIOUS: [SPOILER WARNINGS]

• Jeffrey never attempted to kill Liu or his family.

• Liu had tracked him down since Jeff ran away, which is why he just *appears* a few chapters in [those chapters have not been worked on, yet.]

• Randy and his gang were NOT the ones who started the housefire, niether Randy and the gang or the Mason brothers knew eachother existed yet.

• Keith somehow knows he has a sibling, despite not being told that Liu existed.

• Liu was put up for adoption almost as soon as he was born.

• Troy and Liu get married at 31 after dating since Liu was 25. [idk they just seem so cute together!]

• Liu has three alters: Himself, Sully [who formed when Jeff killed his pet bunny-also named Sully-during an episode of his], and Emil [who formed during the housefire]

• Liu has a son named Sullivan Grüner, who is 16. He will NOT be featured in any smut chapters, but will be in the plot and maybe fluff [?]

• Jeffrey has DID, but he is in denial about it and refuses to get a diagnosis out of fear. Liu and his alters know this, and they feel bad for him.

• Jeffrey only has one alter, who calls themself 'Habit'. He is the one responsible for Jeffreys murders. [EMH refrence, anyone?]

• The only person Habit likes is Sully [Lius son, not his alter] but Sully never interacts with him or Jeffrey because his fathers have bad memories with him [and theyre really overprotective, Liu more than Troy]