Hey guys,
So I changed some info in the chapter labeled "Characters" because I wanted to change Rose's age and looks.
I changed her age because I felt like she was a little too smart for a five-year-old, and the age I changed it to now is more fitting.
I change her looks for two reasons. The first reason is that many people thought she looked scary, so I found someone who looked more innocent. And the second reason is that I have wanted to use this picture of this girl for a long time because I adore her looks.
Anyway.... what do you think of the changes? Do you think they were good? Also, I will be adding another chapter tonight.
I will also be editing the story soon to fix grammar and spelling and maybe change the beginning a bit because I can write better than I was when I was 15. I am almost 18 now.
I would love to hear your suggestions for the rest of the story or any editing.
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Most Protected Of All
Action5-year-old Rose was stolen from her family at the young age of 6 months. She has been hopping from foster homes for 5 years, each of the homes she lived in treated her badly, abusing her every day. Finally, deciding to run away, little Rose runs i...
