Lightning's unfinished Story

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I MUST say that this jumps around a lot, it's very unfinished as I had planned it all would be part of a book series i had in mind, </3 around this time however a lot of family issues where on my head/plate and never got around to it. I made little key moment parts, that i was hoping to place filler in between but never did. So... All over. I'm not the happiest on how my writing was at the time but, since there is so mucchhh I'm leaving it alone. I knew what I wanted with her story but i just never got around to it... 

This is all... Enjoy this mess of writing. 



Prologue: Hazzyeye gazed over into the nursery. His heart skipped a beat once he noticed the medicine cat Daplebark. The tom didn't have a happy or relieved look. Something happened. He took a deep breath trying to expect whatever news he had. The medicine cat shook his head, "Only one made it." He looked sorrowfully at Hazzyeye. "Who?" The medicine cat didn't speak, just beckoned Hazyeye to follow.

His mate Meadowmouse laid still in her fern bedding. Hazzyeye bobbed his head up quickly hoping for her to respond. His heart dropped when she didn't. The white she cat hadn't even moved, her eyes were halfway open, they seemed hollow. He pressed up to her side pushing her to make any response at this moment he realized she didn't make it.

The medicine cat looked towards the kits, which one made it? There were three beautiful kits pressed closely to their mother. She must have been able to see them before... His thoughts drifted as he noticed the calico kit in the middle. The little one looked just like her mother, the tiny kit moved the tiniest bit for him to notice it.

He quickly picked it up from the scruff and the kit seemed to wail in response to the sudden move. Hazzyeye looked back at his mate Meadowmouse before turning back to the medicine cat. The brown pebbled tom looked sympathetic. Hazzyeye put the kit down to Daplebark's paws. "Is there a queen that can take care of.." Hazzyeye thought for a second this kit needed a name though her eyes hadn't even opened yet. "... Lightningkit?" The medicine cat nodded ''Bluesong will, I had already asked her before I came to get you." Hazzyeye looked to the back of the den. He hadn't even noticed the She-cat in the back. He was so focused on his mate and kits too.

She looked back at him with a sad smile. She must feel bad.. "Thank you." He mewed. The blue and grey She-cat nodded.

Hazzyeye once again had Lightningkit in his jaw, careful not to hurt her. He set the kit down Bluesong immediately wrapped her tail around the kit just like any mother would. Bluesong already had her own kits Palekit and Ravenkit; she lost her other kit Blossomkit a little after she was named. They were clearly a bit bigger than the newborn but not a lot. Hazzyeye nodded and gave a sorrowful smile and padded out of the den. 

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FIRST CHAPTER: Lightningpaw looked to her father; she was unsure how the tom felt she had noticed though he was very distant to her. Her whole life in fact. Not many fathers are too connected to their kits But Lightningpaw was the only one that lived surely he loved her. "Hazzyeye?" He didn't even look back to her. "My warrior's assessment is soon." She added slowly, her only response was a grunt. "Can you hear me?' She added ruffly. An ear flick or two but he said nothing.

"Do you even care?" Lightningpaw asked hotly. "Agh, what am I saying you don't" she finished before hoping of a rock. Hazzyeye was always on the rock staring to the horizon. It was just outside of the Windclan camp. Some warriors exchanged glaces to each other. Some cats had known how much Lightningpaw tried to be close to the tom she was the only one who survived surely he'd show some recognition to her and how she was. But no he didn't. Bluesong was the closest to the parent Lightningpaw ever got and she was thankful the warrior treated her as her own kit and not just something she had to take care of. Lightningpaw has clearly shown lots of gaditude to the blue she for this. Her kits Ravepaw and Palepaw had become so close to Lightningpaw though they all knew neither were kin, they acted like they were anyway. Palepaw was the closest without a doubt. Ravenpaw was always to focused on being the best apprentice to leave any room for fun. "Hay Lightningpaw!" Spoke a voice from behind. The light grey tabby had snuck up from behind her. Lightningpaw bit her tounge in response spinning around to greet him. "Hi Palepaw." She mewed Palepaw blinked in surprise by her short response. "Who put thorns in your bedding?" He asked tilting his head to one side. Lightningpaw rested her tail on the ground. As she relaxed for a second. "It's nothing." She mewed with reassurance. Palepaw shrugged. He knew that wasn't the case but didn't push any more. "Anyways, what did you need?" She added with curiosity. "Mellowbird and Fallowfire wanted us to teach us one more battle move before we got out warriors assessment." He mewed cooly "Really?" Lightningpaw spoke a bit supprised. "I thought they had taught us everything we needed to know!" She added happily. "I did too! But I guess not." Palepaw added nearly with the same energy but showed a little more control. At the fresh kill pile was their mentors. Mellowbird a pale yellow and brown she-cat and then Fallowfire Lightningpaw's mentor a orange brown tom. Both apprentices padded up to their mentors. Palepaw reached out to touch noses with Mellowbird. The she-cat stood up looking back for both apprentices and Fallowfire to follow her. They headed back out of the camp Lightningpaw turn her attention to the rock her father had been sitting a few moments before. But the tom was nowhere to be seen. Maybe that was for the best. The two mentors lead them to an open and flat spot the place had been used for training before the grass that must have been there before was trampled down and replaced with dirt a long time before anyone here has been alive."Okay," Mellowbird mewed looking right at the apprentices. "Fallowfire and I are going to demonstrate our last fighting move to you." Fallowfire had already been in his needed position a few tail-langths away from the she-cat he braced himself for the she cat the pounce onto him. Once she did the tom fell to the ground limply. His one paw has been holding Mellowbird by the chest. Is this a killing move? Why would we need to know this? The tom quickly twisted his body and push or maybe threw Mellowbird off. She landed on her paws gracefully but even though she knew that was the move it was obvious look of shock on her face. Fallowfire got up instantly. "There" he mewed. Haistly making it the Mellowbird's side. Lightningpaw saw no point in this but shrugged and make to the middle anyway. Palepaw was quick to follow. "Lightningpaw you will be the attacker while Palepaw will defend himself." Spoke her mentor.The calico nodded padding of to Palepaw's side being sure to make a gap between them. Palepaw braced himself for Lightningpaw's impact. Ducking his head in as soon as she lounged herself over. She landed right over him. "Palepaw don't duck your head! You need to be able to see and stop Lightningpaw right before she gets on top of you." Mellowbird mewed. Palepaw nodded.  
{~Never finished it hahaha~}

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