So I kinda need help.
So you all I have rewritten this story, since the old version was really chaotic, with no real plot and it was basically written badly.
So I decided to let an Beta reader Ai look over my first chapter and I kinda wanted to know, if you are able to understand the plot, is Marinette to overpowerd (Obviously), am I trying to much, should I leave the infinity stones out, are there plot holes, is the plot too messy, is there awkward phrasing, am I trying too much with the backstory, is my explanation to weak, looking at the backstory?
What do you think?
Yes
or
No
I would appreciate it if you could write down what you think and if theres something that you don't understand or if I'm trying too much, making Marinette too powerful.
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Unstoppable
Fanfiction"Once upon a time, the Devil whisperd into my ear, that I'm not strong enough, to withstand the Strom. But today, I whisper back, that I am the Storm." ─── ･ ｡ﾟ☆: *.☽ .* :☆ﾟ. ─── Marinette Dupain-Cheng was tired. Tiered of people preten...
