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in this story the son of Hades Lucifer is invited into Auradon but raised by Hades he was given more of a choice he could go or he could stay all his choice he could do what he wanted however when Maleificent heard about Hades making it his choices to go or stay she got pissed but Hades made her back off and remined her of their agreement she gets to raise Mal how she pleased and Hades got to raise Lucifer however he pleased but Lucifer chose to...
Character info
Lucifer
Nickname(s)King/God(Pirates) Fairy(Dad) Beastie(Harry) Dealer(Uma) Diablo(Uma Harry and Gil) Raven(Gil)
Age 14
Birthday August 17th
Special abilities:Has fire like Hades and natural magic like Maleficent he can also use a ember like Hades and has his own in the form of a necklace unlike Mal he got Maleficents wings (if you have watched the movie Maleficent that basically tells you what happened in sleeping beauty but in Maleficent POV explaining the whole story and in that Maleficent had wings that were taken) and horns
Appearance
He's facial appearance and hairstyle
What he's wings and horns look like,Lucifer has light brown hair with blue tips he likes to set his hair on fire like his father did he unlike the other villains and vks can use magic on the isle.
Lucifer is friends with the pirates but mostly Uma,Harry, and Gil whatever Lucifer does they support and if he wants something to happen it happens the pirate crew may not be his but he rarely wants anything so when he does the crew does it quickly so Uma,Harry, and Gil don't get mad also Lucifer is scary when angry so if he wants anything the crew is right there to get it and the pirates are very protective of Lucifer even though they don't talk a lot they still want him safe and would do anything for him.
Lucifer loves to make deals and lightly scaring people with his magic.
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Son of Hades
FanfictionThe son of Hades, Lucifer, younger brother of Mal also got invited to go to Auradon but not just for the Vk program for a whole other adventure. Please comment if there are any grammar mistakes. This story will have slow updates and will not have a...