Revenge (a Harry Potter story) NO UPDATES

Chapter 2

Molly Weasley gave her owl Pig a treat before leaving. Pig used to belong to her son Ronald Weasley mostly known as Ron. Ron had gotten Pig on the train ride back to Kings Cross Station after his 3rd year at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. That year Ron and his friends Harry Potter and Hermione Granger rescued Sirius Black from the dementors kiss, which is when a dementor, guards of the wizard prison Azkaban sucks your soul out of your body. They rescued him after finding out the truth about him being innocent and the real killer was Peter Pettigrew who was an Anamgus, which is when you could turn in to an animal. Peter had been undercover as Ron's rat Scabbers and Sirius to repay Ron for losing his pet gave Ron Pig. Now Pig was getting old and Ron got a new owl. Ron gave Pig to his mother so he could rest peacefully at the Burrow. Pig was still his energetic self though and was flying around Mrs.Weasley on her way out through the door. Mrs.Weasley was heading to visit the rest of her family at Weasley Wizard Wheezes for her son George's birthday and her son Fred's birthday who died in the Battle for Hogwarts on May 2nd 1998. No later than Mrs.Weasley stepped out the door she dissaparated. This is basically teleporting. She appeared in front of the shop. WWW was on the front with a big head that could be either Fred or George on top of it. She stepped in to a magical world with young kids dueling with fake wands and girls giggling over love potions. It was a beautiful place that as soon as you stepped in it you felt happiness streak up you spine and you want to be a kid again. She had to say, she wasn't very happy about this idea of a joke shop, but she had to admit it was exactly what the world needed.
"Mum!"
She was met by an ecstatic George followed by Ron and Hermione along with their children Hugo and Rose.
"Oh, Georgie dear! It's lovely to see you!"
Mrs.Weasley threw her arms around George.
"Geez Mum! I saw you yesterday."
"Was it your birthday yesterday?"
"Well no, but..."
"No it wasn't," Mrs.Weasley said with a grin on her face.
"Ron! Come here," Mrs.Weasley said as Ron blushed. Mrs.Weasley squeezed Ron as well.
"Mum!," Ginny yelled as she came around the corner and gave Mrs.Weasley a hug.
"It's great to see you all! Wait," Mrs.Weasley said as she looked around the shop,"where's Harry?"
"He's with Albus, James and Lilly somewhere. They love this place every time they come. It never gets old! And Dad,Percy, Charlie and Bill couldn't make it."
They all hugged and talked a little bit. After 10 minutes of talking Mrs.Weasley finally said:
"Merlins Beard where is Harry Potter!"
Then as if right on cue Harry came up behind Mrs.Weasley followed by James Potter, Albus Potter and Lily Potter. Albus and James looked like Harry and Lily had that same blazing orange hair as Ginny.
"Harry dear. Great to see you!"
"Same to you Mrs.Weasley," Harry said as Mrs.Weasley threw her arms around him and squeezed. They all talked then later George opened his presents. From Harry he got lots of sweets from Honeydukes in Hogsmeade and him and George exchanged looks. In the card it said: Dear George:
Hope you have a wonderful birthday!
From: Harry, Ginny,Moony,Wormtail,Padfoot and Prongs.

George smiled. From Ron and Hermione he got a sweater with 3 Ws on it like the logo of Weasleys Wizards and Wheezes. The sweater was maroon with gold print
"Just like old times, eh," Ron says with a grin.
From Mrs.Weasley he got a locket and when he opened up there was a picture of him and Fred. George broke in to tears.

Later
Everyone gathered outside to honor Fred. George walked up in front of them in a clearing.

"Fred. You were my brother and my best friend. I will never forget all the fun times we had. I wish you were here to celebrate your birthday. I know you are here though, in spirit. You were Fred my family, my friend and most importantly funny."
Everyone shined white lights up in to the sky with their wands and George threw fireworks up in to the air. When they went off they formed the shape of a face. The person had blazing orange hair and a grin on his face.

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