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February 26th, 2010.
Lauren's POVI was kinda sad because I was dancing alone since no men came up to me yet but whatever you only live once so I went into the middle of the dance floor and started dancing my ass off!! I got cheers and I heard them expand so I opened my eyes and Jess was dancing with me! I always loved Jess she would comfort me through breakups and always boosted my moods and confidence when I needed it. A slow song came on so I held her and she felt a little heavy, I asked her if she was okay and she opened her mouth but before she could respond she fell to the floor. I yelled and grabbed her as fast as I could so we could get back home. I tried to carry her outside but I only reached the sidewalk when we both collapsed . It was embarrassing since cute guys were outside and in their view there was two girls falling to the floor in the middle of a really bad neighborhood. I tried to pick her up when all of the sudden she felt super light, I looked up and there was a Emo guy, now keep in mind I was wasted so i didn't know it at the time but you can sure guess who it was. "You look like you need some help honey" he said. Uh- uhm sure yea! "Follow me" I was really hesitant since I mean I am still smart when im drunk.. sometimes. But hey he was cute asf 😝. We grabbed Jess and headed over to his car .. it was black and had rhinestones on the handles which I loved. He opened the door for me like a gentlemen and we placed Jess in the back as I followed after her. Some other guy with braids climbed into the passenger seat as the Emo one drove off . We went to a five star hotel which left me surprised because i didn't think these guys were rich based on how they dressed. The dread head opened the door for me and as I was about to grab Jess he grabbed her for me. I said thank you and he rolled his eyes at me like wtf.. The Emo guy grabbed my hand and led me inside the hotel. We went through all of the floors which left me stunned but I thought to myself that yk, some people can be this rich 🤷🏻♀️. We arrived at the luxury suite which was absolutely BEAUTIFULLLL. Me and Jess can stay on the couch, I don't really wanna be a burden. "Nonsense! You can stay in my room." Free hotel room service is everything so I agreed. But where would Jess stay? "My room." The dread head said. Okay well. Lead the way please uhm- "Tom, My name is Tom and he is bill." Tom and bill, Thank you. "You're welcome." They both said. Im Lauren or Laurie and that is Jessica or Jess. "Cool! I don't want you to be uncomfortable so here are a pair of boxers and a over sized shirt." He said. Thanks!
toms POV
Lauren and bill went to his room and I took the other girl to mine. I realized I had to change her some how so I went to go ask Lauren. I knocked on bills door but heard some unlikely noises. "shit" I muttered. I went back to my room and wanted to be respectful so I took off her shirt and she was wearing a pink laced bra, she was very pretty and even though she is unconscious. I decided to put my current shirt on her and while it was on I would unclip her bra? Im used to always having women around so im smart like that yk. Once the shirt was on I slipped the straps down and unclipped it. I didn't see anything but my lord what I felt was amazing, they were huge af but like come on i couldn't do anything right now since she was fucking unconscious. I grabbed her booty shorts and slid them down trying to look away and do it. I felt something in her pocket and I took it out. It was a picture of me?? Fan girl much. I chuckled and went back to what i was doing. I figured she could stay in her underwear so I picked her up and she was only what 90 pounds? I laid her on the bed and admired her. This girl was beautiful, she has long black hair and beautiful curves. she has a arched nose which was beautiful and her face mashed together perfectly. I started to yawn and figured that was a sign to put my ass to sleep. I slid under the covers and held her waist. I wonder what she will think when she wakes up..
Time skip!!
Jess's POVI wake up with a banging headache.. what the hell.. what am I wearing ew. I smell like men. I'm not suprised if I laid a few. I start coming to my senses and feel hands around my waist. I slid them off and get out of the bed to get a good look at this guy, he looked familiar but that may just be from last night. i got up and it looks like im in an apartment complex that looks nothing like mine. i climb on top of the cutie but not like that. i put on a serious face which was hard because he looks hot even while he's asleep. I slapped him across the face and scream, WHO ARE U AND WHERE AM I?? "damn chill out baby, you scared me, but uhm im Tom and u were unconscious last nig-" WE SMASHED WHILE I WAS UNCONSCIOUS ?! WHAT THE HELL?! "Oh my god I wish but chill out hübsche Frau." i blushed. "I saw your little friend carry you out the club crying with you in her hands so I told my brother, who she is with before you scream at me, he helped her and we took you guys to our place since she was way to drunk to drive." Well. Can I go see her.. "You don't have to ask me pretty girl." damn. i walked out of his room while he was almost towering behind me which was scary because im 5'6 but this guy had to be maybe 6'1. I turned around and looked at him not expecting him to be staring down at me, and when I tell u I blushed SOOOOOOO hard in this moment I mean it. So uhm where is she. He grabbed my waist to move in front of me and when he got in front of me he turned around and grabbed my hand. "Ill show you come on baby." oh my LORDDDDDD.
this chapter is a little short but please leave me some suggestions?