So someone was telling me how this story sucks and how I was repeating the same stuff over and over again. I would just like to say STFU. It's not easy writing a story and bring ur first time it's gonna be bad. I'm sorry that I would leave gaps through the story but I just found the parts useless/not needed. Okay? So this is gonna be unpublished along with my other finished story "hotel ceiling"
6/27/15 is the date it will be unpublished.