Don't worry, the story isn't cancelled. I apologize for my extended hiatus. I'm now back in action and you can expect a new chapter very soon. In the meanwhile, I've done some revisions to older chapters I've written. I like to think I've majorly improved, so please check them out if you're interested! I'd very much appreciate any feedback and constructive criticism (or harsh criticism, why not?). Thank you for your time!
Note: I should mention that my rewrites were done in two different sentimentalities. Some I've done which are "full rewrites" which is the entire structure of the chapter rebuilt from the ground up. Then the other are "partial rewrites" where the story beats are largely the same, but the writing is tweaked. I'll denote which chapters I've modified on their titles. (Some of them may be abbreviations because of the 80-character title limit.)
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BALAN WONDERWORLD REDUX
Fanfictionmy version of the story and a more envisioned version of the game "Balan Wonderworld".
