𝙞 𝗹𝗼𝘃𝗲 𝘁𝗼 𝗵𝗮𝘁𝗲 𝙮𝙤𝙪

𝗰𝗵𝗮𝗽𝘁𝗲𝗿 𝟭

I woke up tired and still sleepy not wanting to go to school my sister soomin keept yelling at me to get up "OKAY DAMN" hey my name is joong-su or joong for short and as you can tell in the story I have to get up and get ready for school. I pack my things and put on my outfit and head down stairs to eat breakfast then out the door I go. When my sister drops me off I start running to my class because I was so late as I'm running some person bumps into me the person says"sorry" they snickerd as I turn around I saw that is was Amir I rolled my eyes and walked away because I wouldn't waste my time on him after all I was late for my class after class I was tired but I was happy because lunch was my next period I got my lunch and my best friends Liam and luna, they sat by me "soooo there's a party tonight at ken's place y'all wanna go"  "sure" me and Liam says after school I go home and get ready for the party

𝗔 𝗳𝗲𝘄 𝗵𝗼𝘂𝗿𝘀 𝗹𝗮𝘁𝗲𝗿..

"Come on" *honk,honk*
"I'M COMING" I head downstairs and out the door I go and outside I see luna and Liam in Luna's car I get inside the car "let go party!" Luna said we go to the party, "sup" I say to people as I'm walking through the door I went to go sit on the couch as was hanging out In the living room then I saw amir coming in "hey y'all"-amir said to everyone, everybody said hey to my surprise he sat right next to me I was confused on why he did that.

𝗔𝗺𝗶𝗿'𝘀 𝗽𝗼𝘃:

I woke up to the sound of my alarm 'another day' *i sighed* i went downstairs and saw my siblings eating breakfast 'sup' naomi says 'hey' after i ate i brushed my teeth and went to put on my outfit, i was wearing a baggy black shirt that had Korn on it with black cargo pants i grab my bookbag and headed out side i got in my car and drove to school when I got there I was walking down the hallway and then i bupped into to joong my enmie well not really enmies ive kinda had a crush on him since middel school but i didn't want to tell him because i was afraid of what joong would say so i bullied him
I know that isn't the best way to express your feelings for someone but I couldn't find another way I feel like if I tell him my feelings he would just hate me even more so I just bottle them up anyway back to the story as I was walking I bumped into someone "sorry" I said but when I turned around and saw that it was joong I had to snicker so I wouldn't sound so nice to him he rolled his eyes and Omg he looked so cute "shut up" I told myself in my head I heard that there was a party at ken's place I was one of his best bud so I was going anyway. As I walked through the door I say hey to everybody I was walking into the living room and when I saw joong I thought that I could talk to him or at least take him somewhere private.

If you have any tips on how I can improve my writing it would be very helpful😭