A bad past (It's a crappy Sam fanfic)

Screams

You heard berto scream and you both shot up then made your way to where the screams were and saw it was Smokey, and berto was in a half filled pool, odd. And illy said " what happened in here?"

Berto takes off with Reyes phone and try's to leave the building. " what's the code, huh?" Berto asked while walking towards the door. Reyes said "give me my phone back!" " no! I'm calling the cops and leaving this place!" " I can't let you do that." "Why?!" "Cause my superior-." Illy interrupted her saying " BS. I've known men like you. Men who like to keep children trapped in cages. I've known them... and I've killed them." And then Reyes apparently knew what we did and said " I know what you did to me." She said while looking back and forth between you and illy. " your both going to help clean this mess." You said " or what? Solitary? Ha..." illy finished " in your dreams." The next thing you know your both in solitary alone.

Then your lying in the bed that they have in solitary playing with p/n, humming a random song, and you hear a thump by the door and it creeks open. You stop humming and look at the door seeing a drawing of a smiling man on the wall in the hall. You bring up p/n to your hear and make him/her say " it's her." you step out and see illy at the other end of the hall with the same drawing on the wall. You hear a scream and you both start running towards it and see rein on the floor with Reyes coat over her, and Reyes is yelling at Berto and then, illy says " it's Dani, it's always been Dani. I now know your power new girl... let me show you mine." She jump on Dani with a portal to limbo and was holding her on a cliff with her head slightly over the edge with her metal arm choking her, the boys went to help Dani but you held them back, and then all of a sudden you hear illyanna scream and she falls back, but before you can help her Reyes sticks her in the neck with the sedative, illy falls back and Reyes ketches her and illy says " she'll kill us all." And passes out, Reyes drags her away and tells us all to go to our rooms.

You start walking away but someone grabs your arm, you look and see it was Dani and she asks " do you know where she took me? Was it hell?" And just shook your head and walked to illy's room.
Once you got there you saw she was drawing a picture of her, crying, surrounded by smile men, And she's silently crying. You go up to her and say "Сестра, что не так? Почему ты закричал?"( sister what's wrong? Why did you scream?) And she smiles the smallest and says " Она изменила свое лицо на одно из них." (She changed her face into one of them.) you just sat down next to her and asked " are you okay, Сестра?" And she just gives a sad smile and nods. Soon Dani slowly walks in and says " something is happening to me and I can't control it,what was that place? Was it hell?" You and illy smile a little and illy says " no that was limbo, the place we made up." "We?" "Me, Lockheed, Y/n, and p/n." And Dani says " I brought someone for you." She handed lokheed to illy. " at first it was just a special place, we went there in our minds whenever something bad was about to happen, we went there so much, stayed there so long, it became real." " I saw a memory, it wasn't mine. What were they?" Dani asked you and Illyana. " we never new they're names, they were all the same." Illy said while a few silent tears rolled down her cheeks. " they made us cry, and it made them smile." You finished as a few tears silently rolled down your cheeks. Illy looked at the picture and a lot of tears started falling silently, Dani looked at you, you nodded and she nodded back and left. When she left you hugged Illyana tightly as the memories of all the abuse came flooding back.

Later that night you and illy are coloring in the living room and Sam is watching tv, rein comes in and sam says " what's wrong?" You look at rein and she says " Reyes was..." you say " Reyes was what?" Rein looks at you and asks " do you hear that?" You listen and hear the song illy said her mom sang to her, kolybelnaya, Sam says " is that music?" You and illy look at each other and stand up, then illy says " I know that song." And you correct her and say " we, we know that song." And you both start walking towards the noise, with Sam and rein on your tail.

You all stop at illyannas room and she says " it's coming from my room." And rein says I'm getting doctor Reyes." And she runs off, illy reaches for the door and Sam says " illyanna don't." And she opens it to reveal a memory that you both buried, the one with you both running to illys bed and getting under the blanket. You say " no, no, we buried this." the smile man wearing the mask kneeling down next to the bed and goes to reach for you guys but you teleport away, and illy screams " get away from them you pig!" And it turns around, takes off its mask and screams it's unforgettable scream. You and illy scream and start crying Sam pulls both of you away and says " it's alright it won't get you ok? I won't let it." And smile man comes out of the room and tries to grab illy but you all run and then stop in the other hallway when there's a lot more, you go to turn around but, just your luck, there over there too meaning, your surrounded. One try's to grab illy but Sam starts to fight it, illy backs up and another one grabs her and throws her over his shoulder, another one grabs you and starts walking away with you screaming. Sam helps illy and comes to help you, once your free illy curls up into a ball on the floor and says " I don't wanna die! We're all gonna die!" Sam goes and put a hand on one shoulder while you hug her as tightly as you can and Sam says "your not gonna die." And smile men start getting really close, Sam says " do something!" Then illy teleports you and her to limbo , both of you are sitting on the cliff overlooking limbo and she says " I don't want to go back." You look at her and say " I don't either, but we have to help them." She looks at you and nods, stands up and offers you a hand, you gladly take it and stand up and realize that Lokheed and P/n are both alive and they both come towards you and place both of your crowns on your heads. You and her both laugh, you forgot that you were both the queens of limbo and you realize that the crowns are different from last time lily's looks like,

And yours looks like,

( imagin the silver is black.)

And then illy says " we need to go, but when this is over we'll come here and fix it up." You nod and you both take off your crowns and set them on a stone and get ready to head back to the 'hospital' and you yell " sum in limbo omnipotence."(that's all I got from the movie and Google is a piece of klunk.) and you both went back to the 'hospital' with your metal arms, swords, and glowing eyes. And kill a lot of smiley men, and when your all done your eyes stop glowing and Berto says " that's was so hot." And Sam just looks at him like 'really?' And you both just smirk and go try to find rein and Dani.

Hello peoples sorry that this story is awful like I said it's my first story that I have ever written so I'm really sorry is there's a lot of 'and' or not enough commas I am really try with the 'ands' but please at least comment on this.