The great general and the terrible man

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Background it was a hot day the general was getting prepared for assault on a rebel base
as he looked at one of the prisoners and smiled

Barou: hey you're going to be in jail for the rest of your life well I have a way to set you free

Prisoner: really!

*he would smile as he knock him out and then cut open his stomach and put in a bomb in his stomach then he would use a magic potion to heal it, like nothing ever happened  then he woke him up*

*Barou Thinks I remember when it killed me to do this now killing someone comes natural I guess it's just part of the job* ok I negotiated your freedom for one of the hostages go in the base

Prisoner really thank you I can't wait to see my kids again

Barou: you have kids of course you have kids

Prisoner: what does that supposed to mean

Barou: nothing just go get

*the prisoner would go up to the base excited to see his friends and maybe see his family  but then he blew up and created a hole into the base*

Barou: now!

*Barou  men run and take over the Base another victory for the general but then he hears something a car driving behind him a steam car there were only 2 cars in this world steam powered by steam and magic cars If it was a steam car most likely it was nobility behind the wheel*

*the the car front door would as a man approached Barou*

Alfred: with these rebellions it's important to be able to defend yourself I want you to teach me how to fight to be as brutal as you are after all it takes a soldier to take down a soldier

*Barou thinks what does he want most Nobility  just care about their money but he want to defend himself can't he just hire a bodyguard  I don't trust this but I guess I can get some fancy food and get all the battlefield for a while so what's the harm*

Barou: sure

Alfred :yes I can't wait for you to teach me how to fight now may you please get inside my car so we can go

*barou gets in the car and they drive off*

Barou: you're excited never seen nobility   excited to get there  hands dirty  is there any reason why you're excited?

Alfred: well I'll tell you when I'm inside and when I get home how about that

Barou: why not now

Alfred: I don't wanna ruin the surprise

Barou: you're already coming off weird but too late to turn back now

*they  drive up to the mansion and both of them walk out into the mansion*

Alfred: go inside I have a sword in there I can't wait to be a bad ass like you!

Barou: never thought I'd hear someone call me that I'm used to being called war criminal maniac the devil well nice change of pace all right I'll follow you

*barou brings his sword as he follows Alfred in*

Barou: try to hit me with that sword I warn you you will have a few broken bones afterwards but you'll know how to react Quickly

Alfred: I'm scared I'll kill you but all right you're strong I'll give it a shot 

*Alfred swings a sword but barou dodgers it and kick them to the floor stepping on his ribs and punched him in the face again and again till he coughs up a blood has Alfred says stop he finally stops*

Barou: in a real battle the enemy will not show you mercy we can stop if you want  Should've figured soft nobility wouldn't be able to handle this

Alfred :no I want to I can't stop I need to get stronger !

Barou: OK nobles use other people to do the work for them they are lazy and they just rely on others for their entire lives but you you're so different why is that? Why do you want to get stronger?

Alfred: OK I'll tell you when I was a kid my older brother and older sister were killed by the rebels they shot them down in front of me I was surrounded by enemies I thought they were going to kill me but then I saw you you destroyed them rip them limb from limb and after being so brutal after being so deadly after being so heartless to kill those men without a second thought you turn super nice and  you took me back home I know I look a lot different since I'm older but do you remember me?

Barou: you were that kid I'm not gonna lie I forgot about you a little bit but sorry about me being you up and being so hard on you I just always hated nobility for a long time but your different

Alfred: why is that

Barou :tell you what if you can hit me once with that sword I'll tell you deal

Alfred: deal

*Alfred tried to hit him with a sword for hours but every time he swung the sword Barou dodged it each time Barou punched Alfred the punches become more and more gentle until they're were just light slaps to the face Alfred tried to hit him for hours but he just couldn't do it but he doesn't give up he keeps going again and again and again and again until the Sunset came and night began*

Barou: i'm getting tired but you're really determine tell you what I was hoping this would be a one day thing at first but I guess I could stay the night and teach you some more tomorrow if you don't mind of course

Alfred: of course I don't mind

*they go inside as barou sees picture of a woman next to Alfred's couch in the living room*

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