The potter twins

The twins who lived

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Dumbledore read
"Lily, It's him! Take Harry and Hermione  and go." Said James Potter
"What about you?" Lily asked
" Their lives are more important than ours! GO!!"
" Daddy" mumbled Harry

"Who is him?" Said a boy from Ravenclaw
" Probably Voldemort"said another While James was staring at Lily in shock.He screamed suddenly " I married Evans!!" while jumping up and down on him chair.
Lily rolled her eyes"Please continue" She said to Dumbledore

His Aunt Petunia was awake and it was her shrill voice which made the first noise of the day. 'Up! Get up! Now!'She said tapping sharply on the cupboard door. Harry woke with a start. His aunt rapped on the door again. 'Up!' she screeched. Harry heard her walking towards the kitchen and then the sound of the frying pan being put on the cooker. He rolled on to his back and tried to remember the dream he had been having. It had been a good one. There had been a flying motorbike in it. He had a funny feeling he'd had the same dream before."Hermione" He whispered shaking her" Get up! We have to help make breakfast."

" Cupboard? Where are they sleeping?"Sirius said puzzled
" We'll find out if you stop interrupting" said Snape
"Silence" boomed Dumbledore

His aunt was back outside the door. 'Are you up yet?' she demanded. 'Nearly,' said Harry. 'Well, get a move on, I want you both to look after the bacon. And don't you dare let it burn, I want everything perfect on Duddy's birthday.' Harry groaned. 'What did you say?' his aunt snapped through the door. 'Nothing, nothing ...' He said
Hermione woke up,Suddenly a huge spider came from behind his shoes. They both were used to spiders, because the cupboard under the stairs was full of them, and that was where they slept.

"Not fair!!" Lily shouted " Why should they cook for her"
" They sleep in the cupboard " Remus screamed" How can you allow that!!"He said to Dumbledore
" it's the future me" He said" "anyway let me continue."

Hermione put the plates of egg and bacon on the table, which was difficult as there wasn't much room. Dudley, meanwhile, was counting his presents. His face fell. 'Thirty-six,' he said, looking up at his mother and father. 'That's two less than last year.' 'Darling, you haven't counted Auntie Marge's present, see, it's here under this big one from Mummy and Daddy.' 'All right, thirty-seven then,' said Dudley, going red in the face. Harry and Hermione , who could see a huge Dudley tantrum coming on, began wolfing down their  bacon as fast as possible in case Dudley turned the table over.

" Thirty-Seven sooo many"said Marlene.
" I bet the twins don't even get one on their birthday!" said Peter

Once, Aunt Petunia, tired of Harry coming back from the barber's looking as though he hadn't been at all, had taken a pair of kitchen scissors and cut his hair so short he was almost bald except for his fringe, which she left 'to hide that horrible scar'. Dudley had laughed himself silly at Harry, who spent a sleepless night imagining school the next day, where he was already laughed at for his baggy clothes and Sellotaped glasses. Next morning, however, he had got up to find his hair exactly as it had been before Aunt Petunia had sheared it off. He had been given a week in his cupboard for this, even though he had tried to explain that he couldn't explain how it had grown back so quickly.

"Magic, you stupid boy!Magic" said Lucius
" SHUT UP!!" Lily yelled sending him a death glare" he doesn't know yet and don't you dare call him stupid!"