[Author's Note 2]

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aaaand that's the end... Thanks for reading this little short story of mine! Feedback is appreciated but don't just go "it sucks" with no explanation on how I can make it better because that isn't helpful to me, sorry. I was going with an old Creepypasta style story where some stuff is still left to the reader's imagination and hopefully I did it in a way that isn't frustrating if that makes sense?

If you had a favorite part, let me know and why! If you had a part you didn't like, let me know and why! Like I said, feedback and constructive criticism is appreciated :)

There were a few references hidden so let me know if you got em! I think there's only like three? I don't know, I wrote the damn story and can't remember off the top of my head lol. One of them requires a little "digging," I guess you could say but other than that let me know what you found!

That's all I've got to say... once again, thank you for reading the story, I very much appreciate it! Bye bye!

-Olive

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