black widow the newest spider man

venom

As he said that he swung toward me trying to kick me but I backflipped out of the way I shot webs at him trying to pin him but he kart wheeled out of the way we then went up and started throwing punch after kick I manned to web him to a wall I go to take off his suit but then i realized I was in public so I got him off the wall and draged him to the local church wich no one was in i tried to get it off him but i wouldn't budge so i backed up a bit and acsidently bumped into the bell

It rang as Peter and the suit screamed as I lunges of him and tried to get me but I doge it and it landed on the bottom floor where Eddie Brock was he was a reporter that worked for the daily bugle that called us meneses I wached as it got on to him before I could stop it and it ran off we would have to find it

Later I brought Peter to his house and we spent the rest of the weekend stoping some small crimes when we returned to school
Flash tried to bully Peter again I told Peter to embarrass flash so he wouldn't try it again and he did flash walked up to him and said looks like your friend isn't here to protect you as he tried to punch him but Peter doges and backflips over him and grabs flash by the waist and flips him and then walks over to me and says how did I do great I say you embarrassed him real good bet he won't try anything

after school Peter invited me over to his house and we watched the news about iron Man and the avengers meet I say you think we could join them mabey he says but how is the question we should be asking

????? I could answer that for you ahh we scream as we turn back to see

How did you get in my house Peter says :Nick: I can go any where I want to : what are you doing here? I want to invite you to join the avengers I see how you fight and I must say I'm very impressed here's my card. call if you diside on joining

Wow 415 words great how did I do on my writing tell me what I should improve.