Got demotivated and forgot most of the things that happened in the fanfic. Thought that since I was not motivated to write further chapters, why not remove all the loopholes and bad things that reviewers pointed out?I have also tried to flesh out the characters, change the plot by a small margin, and make sure that I am going to follow my original plan of him being a heartless Neutral Evil person.
'Thoughts'
"Talking"
*Action*
[System]
{Author},
<<Mental Command / Menatal Communication.>>
NOTE: This story will have extreme actions, gores, and betrays. Please read at your own discretion.
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(--- ??? POV ---)
*BOOOMMM*
My ears rang, and my heart raced as the deafening explosion echoed through the air. That was the last thing I remember before my mind went blank.
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*Ba-dump* *Ba-dump* *Ba-dump*
My heart started to beat loudly as I saw the scene in front of me. The vivid void filled with a multitude of colors made my heart race in fear of the unknown. My mind was ringing with the last sound I heard before I... I died?
' *Phew* Calm yourself down Ryo! Calm yourself down Ryo!'
Taking deep breaths for a few seconds, I was able to calm myself down but still, my mind was on overdrive and I was feeling throbbing pain all over my body... If I even have any 'body' to begin with.
'Hah.'
Examining myself up, I signed in relief to find myself safe but I am completely naked right now. My blank hair and almost black eyes remained the same as I remember if there was no physical change. My looks were normal, like that of a passing Mob A as long as I remember.
That was what I could say at least, because it was now wrapped in some sort of dull purple gas-like state. I don't know for how long I have been floating in here.
'Is this my soul?'
Thankfully, somehow I'm able to survive in the Void without any air. My thoughts were mangled because of the explosion in the experiment I was doing.
'This shouldn't be. The experiment was stable and I am very sure that the whole process was stable. And let's not forget that even if the experiment was unsuccessful and resulted in a black hole, according to SR's Law of Relative Void, I should have been dead because of the Void Wind.'
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Code: Infinity [Reboot]
FanfictionWaking up in the world of Franxx and being forced into a game of 'Gods' with multiple penalties imposed on him was not a cup of tea for Ryo. With a loud explosion from a stupid experiment he was performing, Ryo finds himself floating in the void as...