Part 1
✯ writring points✯
This story is purely fictional.
( this bracket is for characters thoughts and thinking)
This novel will be written as third persons pov
{ is one is for past telling so reader doesn't get confused}
[ This bracket will be used for actions they r doing while they speak]
If any grammatical or spelling mistake please cope up or try to point it, it can be helpful.
If any modifications needed please state since I'm newbie so I'll be glad if you guide me.
I'll try my best for writing style and good third pov.
✯character input✯
Yi-rim: main lead.
Persuing to be actress
Working off crew
Her family condition is poor
Makes excuses
A citizen of korea.
Jui: main lead
Mentally little unstable
Lives away from her family
Belongs to canada.
Doesn't like talking
Tomboy
Feels realations from heart
Deng: respected by yi-rim's mom as son
In law.
Yi-rim's best friend for past 5 years
Likes yi-rim
Want to help her in everything
Kind hearted
Has many connection
Engeenier by profession
Hyun: jui's elder brother
Past regrets worry him
Is discouraged easily
Always try as far as he can
Can do anything for his family
Business man by profession.
Runa: yi-rim's mom
House maker
Agressive asian mom
Cares about her family but doesn't
Show it.
Saki: Jui's mom
A patient
Has poor health
A translator by profession Korean by origin
Tsubaki: Japanese in origin
Professor by profession
Yi-rim's dad
Love his family very much.
Neo: jui's dad
A ship pilot by profession
Dedicated to work
Korean by origin
Likes children.
✯story begins✯
←Laughter→
♪day1♪
{ As soon as yi- rim comes in she starts recording in her bright smily face.
Yi-rim: hello guys! Today I'm going to wake up my bff to her house I'm secretly recording this so let's stay silent about this shh.
As yi-rim climb stairs she makes sure not to make noise.
Yi-rim: I suddenly remember she doesn't like being recorded.
Yi-rim hides her camera. Then she gently knock on the door. Waiting for a while. She gets angry and knocks harder.
Yi-rim: jiu- ya it's me!! She's probably sleeping.
Yi-rim opens the door by the key given to her by the owner.
As soon as she enters she heads towards bed.
Yi-rim: hey wake up sleepy head!
Jui was in bed sleeping now growned and said " you are here again?
To this yi-rim replied in suprise " didn't you give me the keys so I can come and go as I please?
Jui who was still half asleep now grabs yi-rim's waist " let me sleep more.
Yi-rim pulled jui's cheek and cutely said " let go . U sleepy monster!! Ur breath smells!!!"
Jui woke up seeing yi-rim all dressed up for school she regret waking up now and want to go back to sleep thus left yi-rim's waist allowing her to get up and investigate jui's room.
YOU ARE READING
brutal praise
Novela Juvenilstory of a girl who try pursue to be an actress by can't due to her families financial condition. as day passes she remembers some old days and curses only one person who she thought was her best friend.
