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Reviewer name : Claire ( Anonymous) Book Name :: Dungeon Author ::Ablazeisaleo
Review::
1.Title: The concept pairs well with the title.[5]
2.Cover: The cover is appealing, however,the hues and contrast could be adjusted to make it more bold and visible. The fonts could also be adjusted to suit Authors name and title. With that being said it is captivating but could use perfecting and some tweaks.[4]
3.Description/prologue: Beautifully written and well articulated. It was too long but it hit all the marks it should've and provided suitable bait for readers to latch onto.[5]
4.First chapter: The first few paragraphs were thought provoking and agitating, it broke and tussled with my mind as a reader, However the dialogue needs more work, the lines came across as weathered and unnatural.[4]
5.Character development: The dynamic between Mc and other Characters progressed interestingly and rather surprisingly with his cold and curious personality. There needs to be more of conflicts shown with internal dialogue to make him more realistic and immediate.[7]
6.Plot: Fairly predictable plot, however, it transcends smoothly and writing technique elevated the scenes.[8]
7.Writing style: Writing style was smooth and crisp, it could be better with adding more descriptive skill into the narration. For example, it was stated several times that New York is a certain way without describing how the Characters interacted with their surroundings and senses.[13]
8.Dialogue: Dialogue flowed forcefully and very rigidly, it was nearly impossible deciphering Character voices without the narrator stating who is speaking. That was a let down to the intricate narration weaved into this story. Dialogues should flow freely and in no way should at any point hint towards Authors presence, sadly it was apparent and constant throughout this work. There should be Character perks and traces of humanizing the said Characters. This could be avoided by practising lines before writing and saying them out loud or with a friend even though it might sound weird.[6]
9.Setting: It felt like a breath of fresh air and gave an immediate want to be observed and imagined.[7]
10.Emotional Impact: With rising conflicts and themes it was a mental tug of war not to feel said struggles and development. It was enjoyable and intriguing to say the least.[8]
11.Reviewer opinion: Dungeon is a possible work of art if Writing style and word tapestry is mastered and revised. I enjoyed the struggle and emotional rollercoaster I had to put up with. I will commend you because we all know that writing isn't a walk in the park. It was a lovely read. Thank you for choosing our shop and we wish you amazing insight on your writing journey. [ 11 ]
Total: 78
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