ITSSSS HEEERRREE! My first finished fanfic, being rewritten years later! Now that I'm ✨mature✨and have written many plot lines, I'm back to do my old book justice!
Upon reading my own fanfic, I thought, "wow, this is really good..." and then got to the middle and eternally cringed. (Seriously what is chapter 16 💀). Now when I say rewrite, I actually mean copy-pasting then editing/adding/deleting stuff to make the book better. Despite the unhinged story line (cough, chapter 15-16, cough) I wanna preserve the origin as much as I can, so don't worry about the book taking a 180. In actuality, there's only gonna be a few changes to the plot (for example, Naruto isn't gonna have like two different personalities bc that's kinda weird if you think about it? Instead, the "mask" is him covering up his vulnerable emotions and always forcing himself to stay happy in front of others).
QnA (ask questions here if you want and I'll answer them):
Why are you writing a separate book instead of rewriting on the first?
Three reasons. One, I want to preserve the first book so people and I can look back on it and smile at the progress I made :). Two, the comments on a paragraph get taken off if you edit it. You can still find the comments at the bottom, but I don't want all those comments to basically be deleted (I like looking through them when I'm bored sometimes so it would be confusing to tell who said what when) off the chapter. Three, I write best in third person. Those of you familiar with the first version know that it majorly is written in first person. Furthermore, I purposely dumbed the book down so that it was from baby Naruto's POV, which I think was smart for baby Bee, but ultimately took away from the writing as a whole.
Are you gonna make a sequel?
Maybe not a sequel bc idk how to add a whole other issue considering what we have already, but I'd be down to make another unrelated short story or one shot if multiple people wanted me to. Then again, I'm writing pretty much an original franchise, going to school, working a job, animating said franchise, writing songs for animations, and I have another fanfiction I need to finish so it's really up in the air.
When will updates be?
Uhhh, good question. I'm still working on an original series and next year I'll be going to college, so as you can imagine I'm getting older and have less time to work on this. Because of this, I can't guarentee I will finish the rewrite, but don't fret: you can always go to the OG book and continue from there when you finish reading the chapters here. They'll end and start in the same place, only difference is I'll try to make the book less plot convenient and more character driven in this one so chapter 15-16 make more sense (which who am I kidding, how am I gonna pull that off?)
Actual Story Info:
The story is about Naruto (obviously), and team seven going on an S-rank mission. During the mission something goes wrong and suddenly the Leaf Village is met with a blast from the past in the form of baby Naruto. The book delves into Naruto's life and his mental state, but mainly focuses on team 7 and 8 trying everything to figure out what's wrong with their lil' bean boy as now they get to see the slips in his "mask" before he's had the chance to perfect it.
This is still a NaruHina Fanfic (though I'm crap at writing romance so it's not the main focus). Each chapter will be at least 1000 words, no idea how this is gonna go so good luck to future me.
Naruto and Kurama are friends in this fanfic. I will be aiming for the OG 19 chapters.
Please feel free to comment ideas or mistakes- anything really.
Kurama speaking
Character thinking
"Speech"
(Lil' note from baby Bee): I worked really hard on it so I would really appreciate you reading it. You don't have to vote for this book unless you like it but please comment anything you want.
(Back to 2024 Bee): for legal reasons, I don't own most of the characters in this book. There's a character mentioned in one of the chapters that is weirdly descriptive considering they just pass by, that one is an OC I think I was going to make another book on but never did, other than that idk. Last note, it's been a long time since I've seen Naruto, so the characters may be OOC (sorry about that). Thanks again for all the support on the old book! See ya ✌️
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