Competition (Sally x Julie fanfic)

GUYS IM SO SORRY 😭😭😭

(‼️IF YOU DONT WHAT TO READ ALL THAT A SUMMARY OF WHAT I EXPLAINED IS AT THE BOTTOM‼️)

(Btw it's my OC that's right there ^^)
(I'm not good drawing on a screen 😭)

OK SOOOOOOOO...

I decided that I want to discontinue this BUT-

I'm going to be making a version two / remake in sometime when I have the whole format of the chapters and when I really know what to do for the future of this little story of mine.

DONT WORRY I WONT FORGET ABOUT THIS PROJECT!!!! It'll just take time since when I started this I kinda did have a whole idea of what I wanted but it wasn't clear enough. I realized that the story what going WAY far off of what I wanted it to be.

And as you can tell I kinda made Franny like this evil person When I wanted to make her a kind of anti-hero type of person. I just wanted to make it seem like two siblings that are fighting about a crush that they both have. I tbh wanted to make her a bit

I had some problems with some of the characters personalities that it made me realize that they would definitely not act like this and don't feel too "realistic" and or "relatable".

Like with Jonsey, he was thrown off to the side too many times as if he was a background character. Trust me I really like him but I didn't really know what kind of sibling I wanted to name him as. (Ideas: the cool laidback sibling, the boring sibling, and the sibling that is famous.) (all dumb ideas Ik)

Bea to me it felt like I was projecting too much on her and made her basically into me with her personality too. I wanted to make her into her own character and make her into her own personality, so I kinda apologized with that. Besides from that

Julie to me at first was perfectly done but then when I re-read her parts it just felt like I made her overreact in chapter 3 (idk if it was normal to act that way or nottttt pls help me if you can T.T)

Anyways I'll probably still make the same mistakes in the future like with the personality's but it's fine. As long as nobody has a problem with this or complain about something I'm fine with a mistake or two.

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I also wanted to say that it felt like i added so much drama it didn't feel like it was a love story. I mean but I guess that's what love storys about.(RIGHT????)

I mean I liked chapter 4 a lot because I did have the love story that I wanted it to be. (I swear I like the other chapters okkkk)

Omga I feel like Goldilocks with my complaints T.T

Also I wanted to add this in that I wanted to ORIGINALLY put in around 20 chapters and now if I plan this out right I'll probably do around 30/35 chapters if that's possible. If not then.. idk

Tbh now that I look at my old notes about this story it looks a bit funky... 😥

ALSO obviously no nsfw will be in this fanfic buttt there will be nothing but fluff 🫶🏽 AND IF YOU THOUGHT I WAS GONNA WELL THEN LEAVE!

well anyways

Here's a sneak peek into my notes about the re-make that I have so far!

Also the reason my I'm not formal like how I was a few seconds ago is bc I realized people may think that I'm like super serious but I'm not I swear 😚

I for got to mention this but when I looked back at the first chapter I was like DAMNNNN because of how many times I stopped the story to describe one thing (Sally's outfit is chap. 1 😭)

So I'm going to be formal again..

I realized that the amount of times I stopped to talk about something not Related to the topic made me think about not doing that again. And if someone actually liked it, well I'm sorry but I'm going to stop doing it.

I was also not really researching about ANY of the characters and just going based off my gut on their dislikes and likes. And well I guess I was right about a few things but in the re-make I'll make sure that I'll do more research about my characters just to make them more like how clown wanted them to be. (With my touch obvi)

Btw I'll update this story after im finished but it'll be a bit different.

AND WITH THAT, I shall go continue with my notes and clawing at the wall while crying about all my mess ups! I'll make sure to finish my planing as soon as I can!

I hope you all had a good new years and GOODBYE!!

HAVE A SUPERCALIFRAGILISTICEXPIALIDOCIOUS DAY!!!!!!!

~Fin~

(Dramatic Ik but this is goodbye T.T)
Summary - I'm remaking this story and it will take some time.

843 words (not that much but mk)