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Book Title : 9/10 The title "Kayadhu kalyaan" is good and unique and also suits the story. The title is unique and powerful and relates with the genre but you should capitalize it so readers will get more attracted.
Cover: 7/10 The cover is pretty good but it's not presented neatly. The font and everything is pretty good but as you can see that the girl in the cover isn't visible fully so it's looking a bit messy.
Blurb: 9/10 The blurb is short with a good description of the story. I really like how you describe the story shortly you gave some hints like what will be there in the story. It was just perfect.
Writing style: 10/10 The writing style is just perfect. Dived straight into the story, I loved that, no unnecessary long events that move away from the story's Plot. Straightforward and well defined. Story description (describing events as they occur in the story) is very well written, I can easily imagine what is going on well done.
Character Development: 9/10 You've described the characters very well. All the characters were described in a very amazing manner. Every character has ups and downs. I personally like Kayadhu's character, her character is very strong.
Grammar: 10/10 For your grammar, I don't really have anything to say. It was just perfect.
Vocabulary: 9/10 The amount of descriptive vocabulary you use was really of high level, it would've been better if you could've just put a bit of simple words so that Readers can understand easily.
Pace: 9/10 I really enjoyed the pace of the chapter It was really good. I really liked this story. The character of Kayadhu marrying a demon king who wants to capture the three worlds and being a The queen of demon and other things are represented so nicely.
Overall Impression: 9/10 Overall the book is perfect just you need to improve on your cover.
Rating on Book : 9/10 I really love this story! I got pretty engaged in it and read most of it in one big go. I'm excited for you to update it because I'll probably peek at the next chapter and see what will happen next. I really like how you represent the story.
Total: 90/100
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