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Such a unique title it was suitable for the book . Showed the real concept and was attention catching . It was centred with story
Cover:- 9/10
The cover was well and neatly designed. Although it was a simple and that was the best thing about it. It had the main lead on it , around whom the whole story revolves. The font used on it was neither too fancy nor too simple. It was just perfect
Blurb :- 8.5 /10
The blurb was well written. Honestly speaking it is the best thing in whole book . It was eye catching and created a sense of suspense and curiosity. It well written with use of different fonts . Use of dialogues made it more attractive
Concept and plot:- 10/10
A unique plot which was really not easy to guess. It was interesting to read two people switching their soul and then falling in love .
Character information and character development:- 7/10
It mostly have talked about two characters only . Yn and jungkook. jungkook's personality was well described, the chirpy and cute but I think yn's personality was not too understandable. They both are perfect, it was really fun to read their conversation
Pace :- 8/10
It was steady and enjoyable. It didn't let the readers get bored even after reading it in a continuous days
Grammar and vocabulary:- 8.5/10
The easy grammar was used. And I really didn't found much mistakes but sometimes sentence formation was not too suitable
Writing style:- 5/10
This is the place where you really need to improve. You are writing style was good and well described with easy understanding . But it was most of the times confusing as jungkook and yn have exchanged their souls so when you wrote
"He said 'oh bun ' "
It was confusing. That is jungkook saying this or yn?
I suggest make some changes .
Overall impression:- 8 /10
Overall the book was pretty good I personally enjoyed reading it
Rating on book:-8/10
TOTAL:- 80/100
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