Quick Question

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So I'd like to ask a quick question as I start on the next few chapters: Do you prefer the current writing style, or do you want a new one?

A) (Current)
"I don't understand where you're going?" I spoke out calmly as she stormed out of the room.

She then turned to stare at me. "None of your business!"

B) (Potential)
Ayanokouji: "I am a slave to anyone with a compass, it seems."

As he said this, a sharp metal object pierced the outer layer of his skin; it pierced him painfully at that.

Question: So, which do you prefer? Let me know.

Also, feel free to give me suggestions on how you feel our mc should act in certain situations or any changes you'd like to see.

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