Here's a rewritten version of Camp Cretaceous, with hybrids and scientifically accurate dinosaurs galore! Here's a summary:
When young Darius Bowman wins a free tour of Jurassic World by winning their game, he is thrust into adventure as the park br...
The fog filled island seemed peaceful with the weird ambience of birds and necrofauna blended into one and the trees dropping their stinking rotten fruit as the two palaeontologists dashed through the islands bushes one stopping every couple meters waiting for the other to come.
"Quick! we can make it to the extraction point if we- ARGHH" The quicker one was jumped on by several theropods and dragged into the bushes, the other stopped and with a neutral expression lightly moved as the theropods came out from the bush.
It appeared to be a lightly built bipedal feathered carnivore with a long tail and a short boxy head, it had a small crest of rising feathers on the top, their feathers reminding one of a robin, a giant beakless one and there were five.
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The second one retreated and ran back the way they came, hiding behind a tree before a shock prod appeared in their hand when a giant creature lurches out of the trees scaring them off, it was covered in scales unlike the others but was like them, except for the two very long horns from its head
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It turned and looked at him directly and charged, quickly they ran away never stopping or looking back but knowing exactly where the beast was when a second beast jumped on him and the screen filled with the words:
YOU LOST
"ARGH" Darius said frustrated, putting his head set down "When its not the Herrasaurus, Baryonx or literally any other predator in this game it always the Carnotaurus! Guess its time to take a break"
He glanced at his Brachiosaurus clock and saw it was 10 PM, when he last checked it was 7 PM and he had just finished dinner, he surveyed his room. He had dinosaur patterned blankets and pillows, dinosaur books on his bookshelf and his JW action figure set on his bedside table except a little area where Dr Sarah Harding's book "Isla Sorna's Necrofauna"
"RAH!" His brother Brandon Bowman jumped up on him in the dark.
"Not cool Brand" Darius yelled at his brother.
"Like you know what cool is" Brandon replied "Those Velociraptors get you and the old dude every time!"
"He's called Dr Meriwether" Darius said for the hundredth time, Brandon just chuckled and picked up the book "Chaos Theory" the autography by Ian Malcom.
"His name should be Dr Dinner" Brandon laughed at his own joke as he placed the book on the bookshelf.
"Brand! I'm so close! If I can just figure out how to kill the Herrera's like I did last time before the Carno comes I'd beat the game and win the trip to"
"The trip to Jurassic World, you have said it a trillion times since the game released last week!" Brandon didn't exaggerate " Look if the best gamers say its unwinnable, how are you going to win it?"
Darius deadpanned at his brother.
"Look Darius, I know Jurassic World's you and dad's dream, but he wouldn't want you to never leave your room until mom screams down the house!" Brandon exclaimed "Dad wouldn't want this ya know"
"I hear you but I have to try ya know, I've killed the first Carno twice and the Herrera's five times before, I know winning might seem a bit stupid but I need to try ya know?" Darius replied, Brandon shook his head and looked at the screen saver Darius had (a leaked image of the Jurassic Park entrance sign)
"Well at least take a shower soon, your smelling really bad dude!" The two laughed.
"You do you, just go to bed before 12 PM before Mom notices we're still awake" Brandon left the room as quick as he came. Sighing, Darius put on his pyjama's and crawled into bed, deciding to take a read of Dr Harding's book, skipping to the part on the Carnotaurus.
"Notorious for their excellent sense of smell, Carnotaurus can be distinguished by their counter-shaded body with carmine colours on the upper half, and a tan or white on the underside. Their feature scales and horns appear to be grey in colour. The feature scales on their body remain of a consistent size, but they narrow in their distance as they progress towards the end of the tail, grouping en mass to form a tail similar to that of a Tuatara, they are known to hone in on the scent of their prey more than their actual prey and can lose interest in a prey item if it doesn't smell like prey"
Darius then was struck with an idea, though the game used the skin of Jurassic World's scientifically accurate carnotaurus, it had used the behaviour of the original due to how trainable and pacifistic the theme parks animals are despite their intimidating appearance and would not be the main antagonist of the game.
Quickly he jumped back into the game and played at the checkpoint.
The fog filled island seemed peaceful with the weird ambience of birds and necrofauna blended into one and the trees dropping their stinking rotten fruit as the two palaeontologists dashed through the islands bushes one stopping every couple meters waiting for the other to come. This time the second one stopped at the fruit and with the click of a button now was temporarily invisible to Carnotaurus.
"Quick! we can make it to the extraction point if we- ARGHH" The quicker one was jumped on by several theropods and dragged into the bushes, the other stopped and with a neutral expression lightly moved as the theropods once again came out from the bush.
The second one retreated and ran back the way they came, hiding behind a tree before a shock prod appeared in their hand when a giant creature lurches out of the trees scaring them off, it was covered in scales unlike the others but was like them, except for the two very long horns from its head, now invisible to it, it surveyed the area and called for the second, and the two went down the opposite end of the trail.
The invisibility wore off and Carnotaurus pair chased after the human, being distracted and battling with the Herrera's from before as the helicopter ascended in the air, the second one turned off the lights of the helicopter and safely maneuvered out of Nublar as the words:
YOU WON
Suddenly a weird string of DNA with a cartoony face appeared and cheering him on, gave him two codes to register into the new tour system, one for over 18 and one for under 18.
" I'm Mr. DNA, and you're the first person to ever beat our game, so we wanna reward you with a trip to Jurassic World! Free of charge!" Mr DNA then appeared in front of an unreleased video of several unreleased attractions and upgrades to old attractions.
"I did it... I DID IT!" Darius shouted in excitement as he took a photo of the under 18 code on his little Raptor camera so none can hack it "BRAND, MOM, I DID IT!"
Brand and his mother came in wearing their Pyjama's.
"He actually did it" Brandon gasped shocked.
" Well congratulations Darius... Your going to Jurassic World" Mom said.
AN: Hiya, I'm gonna try and work on this when I have free time, thanks for reading!
