An unexpected visit

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Rewriting and editing chapters rn 5/12/24

Marinette had just come home from school. She had three tests tomorrow which she had to study for, she had to babysit Manon (haha it's not Macon anymore), and had to design hers and Alya's prom dresses. She threw her bag down and Tikki flew out.

Marinette/ Narrator POV (edit, I honestly don't know whos pov this is rn cuz I'm an idiot)

"Oh Tikki I have to much to do" Marinette sighed and sat down at her desk to start her work.

"Don't worry Marinette I know you can do it!" Tikki said cheerfully. She flew over to Marinette and sat on her desk. Tikki sat there for a while, sleep slowing taking over her. Within no time Tikki was asleep.

"Sweet dreams Tikki" Marinette said softly as she covered her up with a small piece of leftover fabric. Shortly after she received a call from Nadia. "Hey Marinette, just calling to tell you me and Manon are almost there." Nadia saids. Marinette sighs. "Ok thank you Nadia I'll see you soon." She hangs up.

"Marinette, Nadia and Manon have just arrived!"Her mama calls. "Coming" she yells and slowly opens up the trapdoor. Marinette walks down and greets the two.

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"Marinette can I play with your dolls?" Manon asks. (I can't imagine how many people are annoyed about Manon being here 😂)

"Of course Manon." Marinette grabs the dolls and hands them to Manon.

✨le time skip✨ (if im being honest i didn't want to write about Mari babysitting and im sure you didn't wanna read it either🫶)

"Bye Nadia. Bye Manon" Marinette says as she closes her trapdoor. She hears a small voice coming from her desk. "Tikki?" Marinette asks. "Oh sorry Marinette I was talking with Trixx." Tikki says looking nervous. "Oh uhm ok." Their conversation gets interrupted by Marinettes thoughts. 

She climbs up her ladder to her lofted bed and opens the hatch to her balcony. She crawls through the small hole and walks to the railing.

The city of love. She lived in the city of love. And yet she couldn't tell him. She couldn't tell Adrien how she truly felt. She wished she could at least say a sentence to him. But no she couldn't all because of her crush. Marinette was lost in thought when she was approached by a dark figure.

She snapped out of thought quickly. (Author here, she snapped out of thought faster than Adrien could say "she's just a friend" just a friend my ass 🙄) "Hello" a small voice came from the figure. "Uhm, hello?" Marinette said trying to make out the figure.

The figure leaped onto her balcony and stood beside her. "I'm Chat Noir" he spoke.

Marinette was confused. Why was her partner on her balcony she thought. OH MY GOSH DID HE FIND OUT IM LADYBUG?! Marinette replayed in her head. "Wait what the superhero of Paris Chat Noir!! Oh my gosh a superhero in person! Wow." Marinette said trying to hide the sarcasm in here voice. But internally she was panicking and wondering if he found out her identity.

"Why thank you and your name is?" he asked with a small smile. "Marinette" she said with a soft smile. "Nice to meet you Marinette." He chuckled as he said that knowing exactly who she was. She was his friend. His very *good* friend. (Besties 🥰) "You too" Marinette replied quickly. They both just stood there in silence watching the stars.

A sudden gust of wind interrupted the silence. It was a chilling night. It was a clear night, barely any clouds and the moon glowing bright. "What brings you here Chat Noir?" Marinette asks in a soft tone of voice, her arms resting on her balcony rail.

"Just-" he pause, doing his best to think of a reason. "I was just lonely- I came out for a little rooftop stroll." He was happy he was able to talk to his friend without her stuttering around him. In his civilian form, she was a stuttering mess, but in his superhero persona she was normal, but just as kind.

"Oh, well, that sounds nice." Marinette sighs. This was her partner, the person she knew best, and yet she didn't know what to say to him. I mean, she didn't have a crush on him, at least in his superhero form. Oh but only if she knew that that was her crush.

The silence was loud, too loud. "You know a think I have a few spare cookies I could grab for you if you'd like.." Marinette offers, giving him her signature smile. Chat Noirs face lights up at this, "please?!" He said excitedly, he loved baked goods, especially with his father being a strict candy cane. (I mean it do be true tho 👍)

Marinette crawls through he trap door to head to the kitchen, leaving Chat behind. Shortly after she crawls up with a try of 5 luke warm cookies. He looks at them before grabbing one and practically inhaling it, "thank you" he mumbles out before gulping down the last four.

Marinette smiles, "you're welcome," before staring back off at the night sky.

"Anything else I can do for you chat?" She says, glancing over at him.

He looks at her, "no, but thank you, those cookie were delicious!" He chuckles, "I'm glad." Marinettes says, breaking eye contact. She had a slight blush on her cheeks. 

Chat continued to look at her. The glow of the moon being just enough to see her adorable freckles. Her eyes, a beautiful blue in the moonlight. Her whole face glowed, making him glad that she was his very good friend.

"I should probably go now." He jumps on the balcony railing, "Bye!" He jumps off into the night. "Goodbye.." Mari mumbles, still buzzing after the meeting that just took place.

Marinette crawls back into her room through her trapdoor— making sure to look it from the inside behind her. "Tikki!" She calls out only to be met by a small red and black polka dotted kwami. "Yes Marinette?" She says in her normal, cute, voice.

"Oh good- I was just going to let you know you could come out now but it looks like you already did," she giggles. "Let's go to bed." Marinette says before curling up under her blankets and drifting to sleep. 

Little did she know a little black cat was looking through her trapdoor glass to make sure she was ok.

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OK OK don't hate me. YET. I know this is only the start and that there will be bigger cliffhangers but yk just let it sink in ok? I mean you never know if someone's gonna get fuc-


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