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Comment on this please

(First don't mind the pic, just wanted to put a random thing I found- lol)

So random and I know I keep making posts that interrupt the flow of the chapters but this time I swear I have a good reason- at least it's a good reason to me and hopefully to y'all as well

So I'm in the process of writing chapter 11, but as a writer I should at least know and remember what I wrote in my previous chapter right?

Wrong.

I'll be honest with you guys I forgot everything I wrote, I think I only remember the end of chapter 9 and a few scenes from some other chapters.

So I went back to read what I previously wrote- and can I just say I am so sorry for everyone who has read those few chapters. A moment of silence please.

How can y'all read those cringy chapters?? I didn't even make it past chapter 2- and it's MY OWN writing....

So in order to improve the story to be a better experience for you, I wanted to ask (more like silently pleading) for you guys to comment which chapter you guys liked, hated and wanted more improvement on.

Just please comment on the ones you liked, hated and just wanted more improvement on.

You guys can simply comment "liked" or "hated" or "improvement" on the one you think it for. And if you have a bit more energy to type a bit feedback on your choice would be appreciated deeply!

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-01- the trip to the museum

-02- three ladies and socks

-03- hooves and poker

-04- the minotaur

-05- pinochle

-06- bathroom king

-07- unclaimed with a side of smoke

-08- capture the flag

-09- a quest? yay.

-10- mrs. dodds comes back with her gang

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I would appreciate it so much, plus it would allow me to make the story much better to read :D

Hopefully if people actually comment- I'll be able to fix the chapters and make them less cringy and all that.

I promise chapter 11 will be out soon :)

Hope you all have a good day/afternoon/evening!!