Are little secret (Smosh games fanfic(

Something new

A/N hey guys I want to start something new a want to give reviews on your books so leave titles of your books and I'll review them my first book is gonna be one that I really like and deserves more reads so again leave your book titles that you'd like me try out and I'll review them in a book called Smosh fanfic reviews or something I'll tell you guys when it's out in the next chapter so yah leave me any book suggestions okay. I'm gonna review the the first one here in gonna say what I like what I didn't like and what would make it better.

Book- power rangers mystic Knights (Smosh games fanfic)

Author- @daniwinchestsr

Pros-

- The detail in this book is great from how much the author put into this story making up a chant for the Rangers to say before they morph. To which Greek God and goddess are which Smosh descendent

-the plot in this book is great i like that she set it up for a second book

-the theme like all great power rangers series there is a theme in this case it is Greek mythology

- the spelling and grammar is great when I publish my book then decide to read it a few weeks later I'm always face palming from how bad my spelling and grammar is but in this you could see that the writing is perfect.

In the words of Hannah Montana no body's perfect lol so there are
Cons to this book like all books even mine have you read any single chapter you'll see how bad I messed up spelling and grammar lol.

Cons-

-I just really don't like the character kit she is a original character and laser corns sister and sohinki's love interestI just feel like every thing is about her the chapter could about a fight between two friends and Kit some how ends up in the middle of it.

-I also feel like none of the other characters are shown as much as kit

-also when ever a battle goes on its the same formula sohinki laser corn and kit team up Ian and Anthony team up and Mari and Joven there's no Anthony and Joven team up or kit and Mari team just the same team up

My finale review

That's really it every thing else is great in the book truly good id rate this story a 8.5 this is a book for any fan of power rangers or Percy Jackson or Smosh in general

A/N have a blessed day in the name of the lord and may God bless your every step send me your titles then I'll review them in that book I'll post something about the book.