Rachael's Pov:
Me and Louis have been here lying on the grass for , over four hours , just talking .
I have learnt so much , about him and his family .
He is definitely not what people think he is . He is so sweet and genuine.
Louis' Pov :
As i'm talking to Rachael , i am realising she is the most beautiful girl i have ever seen and not just on the outside.
We are led on the cool grass , laughing at random things , when i turned to look at her and she did the exact same .
I became lost in her green eyes , i began to lean in . In this moment Eleanor , didn't exist and it was just me and my Rachael.
Rachael's Pov :
As he leaned in , my breath hitched in my throat but i leaned into .
I then thought about how Abi told me about Troy wanting to go out with me and how i was so excited but now those feelings were nothing .
Suddenly , i felt his soft lips crash onto mine and i kissed back.
There was so much passion in this kiss .
He grazed his tongue along the bottom of lip and allowed it to enter.
Louis' Pov :
I kissed her with so much passion , causing an eruption of butterflies in my stomach.
I asked for entrance , which she gracefully accepted.
We sat there for what felt like forever , lost in each other kissing.
We both pulled away out of breath.
Rachael's Pov :
I looked at him , as a huge wave of guilt swept through my body.
" Eleanor " I said and jumped up and ran before he has chance to respond .
I got home and ran into my room and went to bed . With nothing but that kiss replaying in my head .
Louis' Pov :
" Eleanor " she breathed and got up and ran before i could stop her .
I touched my lips and smiled until i realised me and Rachael can't happen .
I think she knew this too.

YOU ARE READING
My Louis
FanfictionRachael Denton is a normal 15 year old , she is the smartest girl in school and hangs with her friends Lucy , Hannah , Chloe and Abi . Louis Tomlinson is a 16 year old football captain and hangs with his best friends Niall and Harry . Not forgettin...