the way I cringed so hard after rereading my fic is amazing.
I was like 'tf did I write, it was so horrible I wanted to drop on my knees and cry my heart out in embarrassment, perhaps, disappearing from this world is the best option right now'
pls, where are you guys coming from? I'm scared, why did you read this?? 💀💀
honestly speaking, I don't like how my story goes, it doesn't work how I planned it too, the story doesn't have a proper plot and I'm just going with the flow, and everything is all over the place,
simply said, the story is absolute shit.
there was too much focus on YJH and KDJ and the relationship progress with the reader, and the amount of character I added was so annoying that I had to kill them off to reduce the burden. yes, I'm so nice.
this story focuses on YJH and KDJ with the reader and how chaotic they are instead of surviving.
I won't say I hate it but I can't say I like it either.
been stressing over how to continue my last chapter since the webtoon didn't show the part of the quest.
what do you say?
should I rewrite or should I just continue?
I don't want to rewrite my story if most of you like this version, that would be selfish of me, but I don't want to give you guys a half-assed written story either.
tell me in the comments!
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FanfictionM/n narrowed his eyes at the man clad in all black who mind you is holding one of his child by the collar of his clothes. 'this emo freak is hurting my baby' he thought angrily while trying to calm down the two smaller boys wailing for his hostage b...