well from what I got some of you want me to keep this version,
I'm fine with that! for those who want a rewritten version you can say so, I can do both.
I'm just worried that the ff I wrote started to get boring since it has little relation to the OG ORV, and I think I'm having way too much fun writing the YJH and KDj chaotic scene-
and the fact the story isn't even halfway yet due to all the scenes I squeezed in, the grammar, and not bringing in the typos, I had a stroke reading my own story.
the plot holes and jumping from one thing to another.
tbh, I just wanna smash my phone and bury myself alive lol.
but I guess I can just edit all the earlier chapters and fix some plot holes.
and Baekhyun's personality makes me want to go bald, he was supposed to be the cold and blood hyung, overprotective of the reader but instead, my stupid ass make him the whiny clingy man-child.
he was supposed to be serious-
how am I supposed to fix that man now...ehh well I guess he'll just stay that way then.
well then Ig, I'll just continue then, bear with me, I'll try to make them more...readable.
for those who want it to be rewritten, you can tell me personally if you don't want to be in public!
you also should point out my mistakes so I can fix them, or else it'll stay that way for months until I decide to reread them.
who do you want the reader to end up with?
thank you for all your responses! <33
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