OHEMGEE guys I finished a book for the first time. I can't believe it! This book has 41000+ words right now. I'm eventually hoping to get published so please please tear this book apart. comment anything you see that doesn't make sense or that you think needs elaboration. This is intended to be a YA style novel so I'm going to do a rewrite or two, trying to add about 5 chapters. If you have any suggestions on how to do that, let me know! I'm glad to move things around and such as well.
If you stuck around to read this long, I thank you. This has been a journey of a couple of years to get the novel to this point and hopefully making it further is possible. So share this story with your friends and neighbors. Tell others. Read it out loud so that you can tell me what makes sense. If you want to be one of my editors and make a pass on a level of this story, let me know! The more eyes on this story the better.
Again, thank you, thank you, THANK YOU <3
Hopefully I'll get another story here on Wattpad soon.
Love and stuff,
AdultFangirl
YOU ARE READING
Lady of Light #Wattys2016
FantasySofia has always been just normal. Normal life, normal boyfriend, normal college experience. But when her boyfriend David bursts into her dorm room a few nights before she's to return home for the summer claiming that there are mysterious people cha...
