English is not my mother tongue therefore there may be translation errors. At this moment the story is (mostly) translated with google translator until I finish it and have time to edit it with my not so good English.
Before starting with the story it is important that you read this note:
First of all, this is a free (very free) adaptation of the movie and its characters. Therefore, there will be things in the main plot that I will not respect and many characters will have quite different personalities.
Which brings me to the next point. This is a dark story and the protagonists will be too, so you have to expect to meet a dark version of Paul Atreides. It will also have explicit sexual content and there will be scenes with questionable consent. Although I am not looking to romanticize it, it is part of the story. In fact, the relationships between the main characters is going to be toxic and should not be taken as a good example for real life.
As long as it is not to complain about any of the things mentioned in this note (you have already been warned), I would be glad if you let comments and give constructive criticism or mention things that you want to happen. The fanfic is already planned and almost all written but if I like something about what you say, I could add it to the story.
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PROPHECY | Paul Atreides
FanfictionThe Kwisatz Haderach should not have been born yet. Careful plans of centuries wasted by one woman's decision and now everyone will pay the price. Amira Zartremen knows that war is inevitably approaching. Her dreams show her a future she does not wi...
