Paradise

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If you think a paradise is a beach or maybe sitting on the coutch watching a movie and eating chips with your family? Well, no.
A true paradise will be heaven!
Now lets begin with the story!

There once was a child named Mark.
He was a silly and smart boy.
His dad was studying science!
So he had a magic door that can acsses many dimesions and a random timeline.
So one day Mark wanted to test it..
He was teleported in 32. AC. He saw many people wearing only white clothing. Then he saw the true magician... The son of God.
"OH MY!" Said Mark,"ARE YOU J. J. JESUS??!Yes I truly am" said in perfect English. "You are not supposed to be here!"
Mark was then sent to heaven.
"Wow" said Mark "This is what heaven truly looks like." He walked around and saw..

An archangel Micheal "Hello, uhm are you lost" he said with a smile "Well Jesus sent me here, and i don't know what to do now, how do i get back home?!" said panicly "You can go home later. What about i show you a tour about heaven, huh?" " Sounds good!".
They went in a libary with over a thousend books about God and the devil.
Then they went in a house called a Prayer House. When they got in they saw hundrends of people praying.
They also went in front of the Gods throne and saw him!
Mark said "WOW IT'S GOD!"
"Yes! Said Micheal"
They both kneeled and left the throne room.
They also saw the seven trumpets with a some kind of a commander waiting for their command to sound the trumpets witch will be the end of the world.
After that Micheal said " Sorry Mark, I need to go. But remember when you get home do not tell anyone what you saw not even your parents. They need to have real faith. Also be careful there will be testes that can lead to hell or heaven." "Okay!" Said Mark. Then Micheal dissspeard in a second!




Mark then went to a nearby park in heaven and sat on a bench.

He was patted on his head by a person. Mark looked at him and screamed "GRANPA" "Hello Mark it's nice to see you agien, just to let you know you need to get out of heaven! Your dad will be woried!" "Okay!" Said Mark.

He went to Micheal and Micheal teleported him back home.
"Wow, this was an amazing adventure, seeing my grandpa and many other great peapol! I need to tell my mom and dad!" Mark said.

Then he felt a loving prezents and felt someone saying "My dear you shall not tell anyone about this exporience, i saw you heard Micheal telling you people need to be more careful with their faith"
"Ah yes i forgot. Im hungry, MOOOOOM!!!"

Sorry for an early finish of part 1 but part 2 will be made soon, i had many buissnis to do, so see you in a part 2. I expect it would be finished in the end of the April so in like April 27th i guess!

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⏰ Huling update: Apr 09 ⏰

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