AHHH IT'S DONE! It's the shortest out of my ONC 2024 entries and I honestly didn't even think it would reach 20K words! One down, two more to go!
I'd like to thank a few people for reading along while I've been updating and help keeping me motivated throughout this ONC! sandydragon1, EverythingsNothing, MiyaHikari. Thank you all so much <33
Please check out the amazing people above! They all have amazing works of their own and some of them are also participating in this year's contest :D
Thank you to everyone else who decided to pick up this story too! To all the silent readers and those who voted only once or twice. The thought that people want to pick up this story even though they're not in any book club is very heart-warming <3 I appreciate the time you took to get here!
This novella is, of course, in its first draft and needs some serious editing. Did you know Corvin's eye colour changes three times throughout the story? Green to blue and back to green XD If you have any constructive criticism to give please feel free to let me know! If you have the time, I would also very much appreciate you answering a few questions below <33
- Who was your favourite character and why?
- Who was your least favourite character and why?
- What was your favourite scene?
- What was your least favourite scene?
- Is there anything you found confusing throughout the story and would like me to explain more?
- Is there anything you would like me to expand upon? (Whether it be world-building, characters, or anything else)
- What are your overall thoughts about the story?
Once ONC is over and my brain has recovered, I plan to expand A Scent of Chaos a little bit. It will still remain a novella but I'll probably add around 5-10K words worth of extra plot and cute moments between Elvira and Corvin (maybe a few more rivalry moments too). This version was so short because I wanted to get all three of my entries finished in time.
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A Scent of Chaos | ONC 2024
Fantasy| ᴏɴᴄ 2024 ꜱʜᴏʀᴛʟɪꜱᴛᴇʀ | ❝ ᴀ ᴍᴇʀᴇ ꜱᴘʀᴀʏ ɪꜱ ᴀʟʟ ɪᴛ ᴛᴀᴋᴇꜱ. ❞ All Elvira Grythras has ever wanted is to climb the ranks of Velux Emporium to become a head perfumer. She has trained tirelessly for her entire life to reach the acclaimed title. Finally...